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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 8:40 PM Title: Ch.3 Captured

Haha, it was purse! Man, you had my heart racing for a while. I thought it was something else and then I read all those clues which made me reconsider my thoughts.

Wow, impressive connection. Making the reader unaware of the situation just like Mark and Tony.

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  That's what I was trying to do...  ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 3:44 PM Title: Ch.3 Captured

Ah! They were trapped in a purse. I thought for sure they were under someone's dungarees.

Nice twist. :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you,... thank you very much  XD

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