Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sure, ask away...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was referencing the Frosted Flakes cereal comercial. The commercial features a tiger named Tony who eats the cereal.

So when you mentioned Tony eating crumbs for breakfast, that reminded me of the commercial.

Author's Response:

Oh, Grrrrrrrrrrrr-rreaAT!  -I don't watch much television... I read when I have the free time.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad to see Carly is a broken woman for losing her hubby, it really shows that she DOES care for him. And hopefully it means that if she gets him back she'll treat him a lot better!

It was her mistreatment of him that caused him to run away and land this mess in the first place; and if we go further back it was Carly that originally shrunk him...So it kinda is all her fault.

Then again Bobby is a macrophile but I doubt he likes being treated badly;a nice, gentle, gts wife would be right up his alley! I just want things to work out for the little bro...4 stories of following the guy around and he just can't catch a break.

Great chapter thought, I'm glad Diane piecing things together already so the story is not at a stand-still. And the stuff with Mark/Tony is interesting although secondary in my opinion to the story of Bobby and his adventures.

Author's Response:

Well, I have to say that Bobby had a pretty good 'Break' while his mother-in-law had him, if she wouldn't have messed-up, and taken him with her to the restaurant, he pretty much had it made!  But, yeah... It really IS Carly's fault, that he became the first human subject.  She insisted that Jennifer use the serum on him, thinking more about her own fantasy's...and what she could do with her tiny sized husband.

-and, yes you're right, the story is centered around Bobby. Hopefully, I can add more victims in the coming chapters.  Also, I also want to bring back Sandra Too!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man bobby just cant catch a break when it comes to trusting women. I know you wont do this because this is a GTS story but if I was in bobbys shoes id try to get the attention of a fellow man, I think a man would be more sympathetic to his plight since they could relate to him better.

So far almost all the women hes been in contact with have backstabbed him, even Diane whos the gentlest has done this in a way since she also wanted to keep him and didnt want to get her daughters in trouble. Not saying you should do that, keep it GTS only, but just telling you what Id do after so many failed attempts with women.

Author's Response:

Thanks Gadget!  Well, it's not like he really has a whole lot of choice in the matter.  It's just kindof like FATE, ya know.  - he barely escapes one, only to be recaptured by another.  Sometimes he's lucky, and sometime's, REAL LUCKY!  and again, he's still livin' out his ultimate fantasy!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool stuff, midnight! A little criticism I have here is that this chapter kind of felt like filler, you could have just skipped all the in-suitcase stuff to speed things up, but it was interesting nonetheless.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dude, whats €™?

Author's Response:

I just went back and fixed that, but I have no idea how I did it!   I've been trying some different ways to upload chapters, and I must have screwed something up!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I know that you are very creative so I wanted to test how creative your writing is.

Sure, you can use those ideas in the future but for the next chapter about Bobby, I want you to surprise me.

I did not expect that waitress to use that napkin Bobby was under, but to me that was creative. I like that.

If I really wanted you to use my ideas, it would be Diane placing a collar on Bobby's balls and that collar is always tracked by Diane's phone so Diane will find him. (Of course this means that Diane had to have explained to Bobby that the collar around his balls is for his own safety, so she can always be aware of his location.) That way, Diane will find Bobby, and probably punish him for escaping. (By now you know what I mean by the "punishment".) Bobby serves his punishment as she drives back to her house immedialty going toward her bedroom and taking Bob out and having her way with him.

That would be my idea, but this is your story. I want to see your vivid imagination in your writing. You never dissapoint! :)

Author's Response:

Um, did you mean that Diane should use the 'Multi-purpose, ultra-sensitive, semi-restrictive, testicular tracking devise?'...  she would never use such a 'bondage' type thing such as that, would she?  Maybe Sandra might thou'..  ;)

Reviewer: Lilis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome stories! I just read 1 - 4 in one go. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Wow, Thanks a lot!  I'm glad that your enjoying it, stay tuned for a wild ride Lilis!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice update! That scene where Diane and Carly are both talking to eachother while hiding information from one another was excellent...So much tension going on here! Im eager to see where this goes!

Author's Response:

Thanks Gadget!  I must admit that, just the idea of Diane being 'secretive' about keeping him to herself, is pretty exciting!  When I proofread this chapter, it got better and better each time I read it... I think that Diane makes a wonderful gentle giantess.  Although, a bit of naughtiness on her part really takes it up a level!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Did you copy/paste this chapter 3 times over on purpose?

Author's Response:

Ha ha! , Had to edit that again, sorry...  been screwing around with cut/paste, google docs spellcheck,  and trying to keep the story going as well...

 It's a learning experience, I can say that!  :P