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Reviewer: Kyle9775 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 5:17 PM Title: Confrontation with Jade pt 1

Plz finish

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 12:15 PM Title: Confrontation with Jade pt 1

Neat, you're really taking this version of the story slower.  I'm enjoying that Steve has some realistic coping methods.



Author's Response:

I try to focalise on the psycologic aspect of the story, making the shrinking occurs less often makes it more feared and more dramatic for Steven. If you want the story to go faster, please feel free to tell me , I'll take it into account.

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