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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2017 4:25 AM Title: Scott's story

Poor Scott, oh well. Linda rules.

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Date: May 20 2017 4:07 AM Title: Another morning 1/2

Love that Scott answers Jade with Yes Ma'am.

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Date: May 20 2017 3:55 AM Title: The shrinking virus

Nice first chapter.

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Reviewer: Kyle9775 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 5:17 PM Title: Confrontation with Jade pt 1

Plz finish

Reviewer: romashka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2016 4:19 PM Title: The shrinking virus

Loved the story

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 1:53 PM Title: The shrinking virus

Enjoying the story very much. Will he make it to the teacher?

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 5:31 AM Title: The shrinking virus

Great writing! Loving her take-charge attitude

Reviewer: iamwhoiam327 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 2:10 PM Title: The shrinking virus

I liked how Jade picked up scott and humilated him very rich indeed.

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 5:16 PM Title: The shrinking virus

so is the story over???

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Date: November 07 2014 9:10 AM Title: Escape

I hope this doesn't die. I want moarr feet torturee!

Reviewer: goku321 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2014 6:23 AM Title: The shrinking virus

Hope you still continue the story and I hope that jade is telling the truth and will be gentle for now on.

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Date: April 24 2014 8:00 PM Title: The shrinking virus

I hope this doesn't end good for Steve since I want to see future tortures from Jade on him..

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 4:37 PM Title: The shrinking virus

I've suspencted for a while that there was more to Jade and her "obssession" with Steve.  I can only hope that her feelings are true and that this won't go horrible wrong.

Author's Response:

Ha ha, I guess you'll find out in the coming chapters ;)

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 4:32 PM Title: The shrinking virus

I'm so glad you're adding new chapters, I was looking forward to reading more.


I hope Jade will hold true and help him out. But...why?

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, yeah I was kind of busy , maybe in a few time if I keep the motivation to do it the next one will be uploaded fast.

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 9:57 PM Title: The shrinking virus

Can't wait for the new chapters!!

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Date: April 06 2014 8:18 AM Title: Confrontation with Jade pt.2

can't wait!!

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 12:15 PM Title: Confrontation with Jade pt.2

this is getting better and better

Author's Response: Thanks, it's mainly thanks to christiawi9 . He helped me a lot ;)

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 11:42 AM Title: The shrinking virus

In response to your comment about seeing the story go faster.

I'll probably just be checking in until we see some real reduction occur in Steven, but until then I appreciate your laying the groundwork that will make it richer.  Take your time and write what you want, it will be enjoyable.

Author's Response:

Thanks ! I'll try to make as much scenes as possible to please anyone. I know on this website many persons prefer to have directly little persons and really tall one. But I'm part of a really few minority that prefer the symbolic aspect of that.If my story shows all the things the character loses as this scurge strikes him, I'm also aiming to show the psycological impact those changes have on the characters, as they get smaller they lose respect/self confidence and become more and more weaker. (I'm not saying that my main character will ;) ).I think it's also important for the reader to feel concerned for the character. For exemple I think the way I'm writing is kind of better (for me at least) to feel like the character is real or even to think it could be you, a thing I think is hard to feel when you read people immediatly shrunk to an insect size. Fortunately if Steven is taking too much time to shrink , Scott is there too, and thanks to this character I still will able to add unaware and giantess scenes soon.
Thanks for your support realRS, I appreciate that a lot ;) 

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 7:29 AM Title: The shrinking virus

I thought Jade was the main villain in the story for a long time, but she now seems like she's kind of helping Steven find a way out of all this. I could be wrong, but it almost feels like she wants him to succeed.

Author's Response:

Well how to say it. Jade is a really mixed character, she doesn't understand her own feelings and only see the world and anything she does as a competition she has to win. Her relationship with steven is not really what you think, it's rather a love-rivalry relation. Jade is the kind of girl who always got what she wanted ( boys or objects) and has always been jealous of her step brother. If you like this character, the coming chapter basically speaks about her feelings and why she acts this way. (She likes to show who's the boss and feel superior but isn't that evil deep inside.)

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