Reviews For Working for Mina
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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date

Nice! Next chapter should be great! I had all sorts of ideas flash through my head while reading this.

   The part where she explains to Joe, about where she used to work, at the laboratory, where she actually created the 'stuff'... I instantly imagined her appartment filled with tiny little slaves!

*   She has been Joes supervisor for 2-year's, that would mean that she's had 2 whole year's to collect a nice little batch of miniature servants!

- But then, she said that she hadn't had a little man for nearly two year's...

I don't get it...

Still pretty good chapter thou'

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date

OK, now things are starting to warm up.

Hmmm...punishment should mean that he is forced to go where he doesn't want to go.

Looking forward to the rest of this story...

 

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date

Keep this up please. Really liking the characters.

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