[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina
Excellent. I love it when the writer gets on with the action and to skip dinner was a bonus to me. I cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date
Nice! Next chapter should be great! I had all sorts of ideas flash through my head while reading this.
The part where she explains to Joe, about where she used to work, at the laboratory, where she actually created the 'stuff'... I instantly imagined her appartment filled with tiny little slaves!
* She has been Joes supervisor for 2-year's, that would mean that she's had 2 whole year's to collect a nice little batch of miniature servants!
- But then, she said that she hadn't had a little man for nearly two year's...
I don't get it...
Still pretty good chapter thou'
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date
OK, now things are starting to warm up.
Hmmm...punishment should mean that he is forced to go where he doesn't want to go.
Looking forward to the rest of this story...
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of the date
Keep this up please. Really liking the characters.
Date: February 02 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina
Thanks guys! Unfortunately it might be awhile before this gets updated. I just went to upload the story and when I hit add it said I didnt have access. The whole thing was lost. Lesson learned...
Date: February 02 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina
Had to come out of lurking to say this is great! Lookin forward to see how you develop the story
Date: February 02 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina
Freakin awesome!! I need more!!! Hope there's butt action soon! Keep them coming!!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina
Fantastic setup! I cant wait for the action.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Mina
vinegary fritos, Mina's toe's, sound so sweet, on those size 12 feet, her wide shapely hips, and those large puffy lips... Oh, sorry... I got carried away there.
Can't wait for the next chapter! ;`)