Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: A lesson in the shower

Hey I got your msg.

Alrighty, I'll give you a review on this. In all honesty, I DO read this story per update, I'm not sure why I don't comment though...

Anyway, I liked this chapter, especially the shower scene. I also like the message she was trying to convey to him by being rough with him. She's right about that, he can't expect the entire world to be careful with him so HES gotta be more careful.

Love the relationship youve built between them, they seem to really care for one another which is something you dont see too often in stories on this site. You know, siblings actually not hating eachothers guts...

It has potential. I'm not sure where the story is headed; if you have some kind of end goal or if its just "the life of shrink boy". But either way, its a good story!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! And that's my goal; leave the reader wondering. Do I have an ultimate plan? Is there something more to this? Who knows... well I do, but that's besde the point.

Siblings, as much as we don't always show it, do ultimately care for one another, and that was the message I was trying to convey here, so I'm glad I got it across.