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Reviewer: Jgfcool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 8:34 PM Title: Date 15: Madison's Garden (Part 1)

You should add more "love" moments in your next stories

Reviewer: Jgfcool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 8:33 PM Title: Date 15: Madison's Garden (Part 1)

You should add more "love" moments in your next stories

Reviewer: Prodiginous Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2016 10:50 PM Title: Date 15: Madison's Garden (Part 1)

I have taken great joy from reading this story so far. It is very expertly written and I have always been a sucker for star-crossed love stories such as this one. It is my sincerest hope that you will be coming back to it in due time. Just be sure you are ready when you do. A writer is nay a writer without their passion. I expect BIG things from you (pun intended). ;)

~Johnny



Author's Response:

Thanks Prodiginous! Glad you enjoyed it :) I've been bogged down with my studies recently, and I'm actually not doing so well, so I had to stop writing to focus x.x There was a period where I did write something over the semester break, but I got scared off by the new site UI, thinking something happened here lol >.< I honestly don't see myself writing any time soon, but it's my hope that I can pick it up again in the future!

Once again, thanks for reading! Hopefully my grades pick up too, hahaha... *self-deprecating laughter*

Reviewer: wwebby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 5:08 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Very nice. Please keep going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, wwebby! I My updates are sporadic, but I do update when I can :) I'll see this story to through to the end!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 7:29 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Michelle is a reminder to Madison on why she has that job, why its so important. Wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

I've never talked much about the tinies outside of Madison and Eliot's hometown, so I thought I'd give a glimpse of what a giantess meant to a regular uninitiated tiny. Kinda makes Claire out to be like a kaiju when she romped around scouting out cities in the South, in hindsight. Heh. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 7:28 AM Title: Date 15: Madison's Garden (Part 1)

Two chapters, back-to-back? You've more than made up for lost time. Two thumbs up!

Author's Response:

I actually wrote chapter 14 waaaaaay back more than a month ago xD Thanks anyway!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 7:22 AM Title: Date 14: Resolutions

So, Madison has ticklish feet? Interesting!

*Insert mischievous snickering here.*

Author's Response:

Makes for being stepped on not be a one way street :p Eliot has fun tracing his hands through Madison's grooves to find her eroginous zones :) 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 9:59 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Of course, I plan to write an ending to the chapter I contributed, will work on it soon...

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 6:15 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Class starts next week? Hmm, you may be younger than I imagined you to be. I look forward to whatever else you've planned. I haven't forgotten about the chapter I sent you, got a couple more to write. Just need to clear the 3 stories I currently have going.



Author's Response:

There's no rush :) I'm just glad you still remember XD My schedules been real busy the past year or so, so I'm in no real hurry. Take your time!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 2:58 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Aw Eliot, you're so sweet! Loved the way he made up with Madison but that was scary from Marian although if she knew, then its just a little warning. 

Glad to see you updating. Since you'll be in the summer break soon, I hope you and can update more! I'll try to do the same but it won't be for a while .



Author's Response:

Hey Nostory :) I'm actually on break already, but class starts again next week! D: Hopefully I'll be able to write one more chapter of something before the semester starts again...

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 7:34 PM Title: Day 13: Confidence

Marian pretty much acted as expected, not that it's a bad thing...It fits well within her pseudo Royal/Goddess persona.



Author's Response:

Haha, that she did :) I initially thought of writing her as a motherly figure, but I didn't want the Matron to be too soft, so she had a bit of fun roughing Eliot up. Madison won't be too happy if she finds out, though :p

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 9:33 AM Title: Day 13: Confidence

*Wipes droplets off mouth*

WOW! That was, without a doubt, the hottest piece of foot-slavery I've ever seen depicted here. And, with all due respect to Madison? She's going to have a tough act to follow!

Author's Response:

Heh, if Eliot weren't already in love with Madison, he might just have been taken by Marian :p

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 8:14 AM Title: Day 13: Confidence

"To Whom It May Concern:

Will review later. Went out for some ice water, first.---Cc"

Author's Response:

o.o O-okay... *twiddles thumbs while waiting anxiously*

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 6:54 AM Title: Day 13: Confidence

So the Northern giants need humans after all, thats the biggest piece of information you've let out. Now  for Madison, the girl needs to know she can be with Elliot.



Author's Response:

I imagine it would be difficult to build any kind of modern tech with a giantess's hands! They've been pretty firm with their superiority for many years, but technology would eventually catch up to them. The times, they are a-changin' :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 2:00 PM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

Oh, dear! I don't know what I dread to see in the next chapter, more. Unjust punishment...or carnal consolation?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Whatever's going to happen, Eliot's going to have one heck of a time :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 12:16 AM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

Great chapter. I'd been looking forward to some one on one time with Matron Marian. Liked the emotions represented in this chapter as well. And I'm liking Stephanie more and more.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :) I'm excited to write for Marian, too. Look forward to it!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 11:52 PM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

 Wow, into the chambers of the Matron herself, Madison breaking off the relationship and missing, I really can't wait for more!

  I must add that your writing has really improved by a lot since you started this story, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've been out of practice when I first started, but I think I'm getting the hang of writing again :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 6:26 PM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

Wow, Madison was kinda harsh on herself this chapter, but not only that, she was kinda harsh on Elliot too...Just breaking up with him, no discussion, no nothing.

And of course, she doesn't see that breaking up with him is hurting him too, especially leaving him by himself in this GTS haven. She could have at least taken him back south or arranged for it. But I guess I can't blame her for not thinking things through with how emotional she is right now!

And now he's stuck with someone as intimidating as the Matron of all people! Jeez. I can't say I wouldn't be scared shitless if I were him, the Matron hasn't doens't exactly seem like the "lets be friends" type, she seems more like "you'd better do what I want right now or else" type of person.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Madison just needs some time alone for now, so Matron Marian's taking the spotlight for a bit :) We'll see if she's as rough as she is intimidating!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 6:52 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Guess we know why Madison wouldn't want any contact with the South for fear what the Northern giantesses  would do to the humans with their ignorance. 

 

Nice tidbit about giantess reproduction, maybe we'll see Eliot visit one of those places where he can learn to pleasure a giantess?



Author's Response:

Maybe so, maybe so :p Sooner or later, they'd have to do it!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 4:47 PM Title: Day 11: Recuperation

Thanks for finally updating! This definitely puts a new "foot" note in Madison and Eliot's relationship. ;-)

Author's Response:

Hopefully, it works out for them :) Sorry for the late update, I actually wrote this chapter last week,  but considered scrapping this week, but I went ahead and published it anyway ~_~ Moar Madison and Eliot action next chapter! 

 

Thanks for reading! 

 

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