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Reviewer: VelvetSK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2023 3:30 AM Title: Vore

I appreciate what you've done here. You've got some simple scenes with some good details. You've got some serious range in your fetishes too, which is surprisingly hard for some people. 10 stars for giving an often ignored part of the community what they want, and being prolific about it too.

Personally, I think written porn is enhanced by a bit of context. It should be simple, with very little words needed to explain it so people can ignore it if they want. Ex: "Emma is a senior. Jimmy is a freshmen. Now she's going to eat him and he'll never experience college!" Food for thought.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2015 5:00 AM Title: Ass Insertion, Ass Crush, Hard Vore

I really liked this concept!! I would love seeing some more unaware shrinking to 1/8-1/16" and ass isnertion plots!! with lots of irony and sarcasm, toilet jokes, and of course unfortunate endings. I also would love unaware transformation plots of someone becoming the inner back area of a panties.

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2015 2:43 PM Title: Vore

Hey love your stories can we get maybe some footwear or maybe giant couple sex with the captive ? thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and yeah, I plan to do some couple stuff pretty soon. As far as footwear is concerned, I can probably feature it within a chapter. I've been thinking of doing some unaware stuff, so I could put it there.

Reviewer: 101st airborne Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 3:23 PM Title: Vore

This is so awesome i absolutely love it. I was wondering though if you could do a chapter on feet and a soldier being the giantess would be great 

But yeah brilliant stuff 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. Your idea is very interesting, I'll see if I can do it. I have the next chapter already planned, but I'll try to throw what you're asking in right after that.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 11:03 PM Title: Vore

Okay based on what I've read so far, you'll need to improve a lot if you want to make money from your writing. Not trying to be mean but you need it, Not saying you can't make money from it but not right now. 



Author's Response: Of course, I plan on it. I'll take any advice.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 1:05 PM Title: Ass Insertion, Ass Crush, Hard Vore

Oops. Meant to give you the 10/10. :D

Author's Response: Oh. Well excellent! Thanks for the rating :)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 9:04 AM Title: Ass Insertion, Ass Crush, Hard Vore

Erotic!

Author's Response: By all means, tell me how I can make it 5 stars!

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 9:08 PM Title: Vore

Oooh how fun :D

How about a focus on odor, but not just any odor.  I'd like to request a focus on bad breath.  Maybe a micro gets stuck in the braces of some unknowing slob?  Maybe a cruel master tortuers her slave with morning breath?  



Author's Response: That is definitely an interesting request. But yeah, totally, I'll throw it in. I don't know if I can drag out a chapter for it, but I can definitely put a scene in there for you.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 6:18 PM Title: More Ass Play (Mostly)

I'm more into the plot building of an actual story, but I couldn't help but like this story in it's own sick and cruel way.

10 stars to smut well written.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the rating! I'm glad you liked it. Since you're into more plot, you could check out my other story, Everyday Interactions. I'm placing the sexy bits from that story in this story as well, so you might enjoy that one. 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 11:48 PM Title: Vore

I'd like to see some members of the ibtc. Because SOME OF US WERE STUCK IN THE BATHROOM WHEN THE BOOB FAIRY CAME AROUND!



Author's Response:

No problemo, easy to do that one. I'm sure I'll bring that in with another main character later on in the story when I throw some couples play in there.

Reviewer: Jamilton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 3:09 PM Title: Vore

Great stories here, very up my road with the giantess crushes. If you do a next chapter then maybe you could do a breast crush. That would be awesome!

Author's Response: Sounds like a challenge. I'll see what I can do.

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 1:17 PM Title: Vore

Very Hot stuff here. I am a fan of a story leading up to these scenes, but heck you did say just the good parts and you delivered, especially on the hard vore, I love me some violent giantess.



Author's Response: Thanks! This will be the compilation of all of my death scenes. I do plan on adding a more intricate story later on.

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2014 9:48 AM Title: Vore

Wonderful idea! I'm very excited off the ass chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks, and you're in luck. There are three now. You can clearly see the favoritism. :p

Reviewer: io1908 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 12:18 AM Title: Vore

Hey, thanks for your effort. Amazing vore description there! Nothing better than tasty, pretty girls!!

Author's Response:

Agreed! And thanks, I'm always proud of the strong descriptions. Check out the new vore chapter, I believe I've improved.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 8:26 PM Title: Vore

This is easily the best story I've seen on here in months.

Great ideas, well written scenes, and overall a fantastic piece of work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and compliment. You should check out the collection now; it has greatly progressed. 

Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 9:56 PM Title: Vore

Mmmmm I liked this for obvious reasons (:



Author's Response:

TBH, I had read a story of yours prior to writing mine. I actually thought of you when I named her lol

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