Reviews For The Perfect Woman
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 6:08 PM Title: The Meeting
Date: January 13 2014 6:08 PM Title: The Meeting
I am glad you are writing it is always nice to see new writers as always work on improving (:
Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 6:59 PM Title: The Meeting
Date: January 04 2014 6:59 PM Title: The Meeting
Really good story so far... Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I appreciate it! Love the username btw!
Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 3:10 PM Title: The Meeting
Author's Response:
Date: January 04 2014 3:10 PM Title: The Meeting
This looks really promising, especially the tags Insertion, Toilet, Unaware and Butt, in combination of size micro though I had liked nano much more (for example 1/8"). Keep writing, you have proper spelling, grammer, and text flow.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll have to consider nano for next time!
Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 11:20 AM Title: The Meeting
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Date: January 04 2014 11:20 AM Title: The Meeting
Not bad for a first story has small details that could be improved on.but we pick those up as as we go I would like to see more (:
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I appreciate it! More to come!