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Reviewer: joshirosama Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 8...The Empire Strike Back Pt 1

how soon?



Author's Response:

Right now :)

Reviewer: joshirosama Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 6...Face of the Enemy

looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: joshirosama Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5...Up Close and Personal

next chapter when?



Author's Response:

Tomorrow most likely

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

This story is really great! And im loving the newly established love beween gts and human...Here is my issue with this story:

Its intimidating to read!

It took me till now to man up and read this, and its all because of those massive word walls! They make me want to give up, especially when I lose my place and have to skim till I find it again.

SERIOUSLY, break up those giantess-sized paragraphs into smaller, more manageable, bite-sized ones! Really, this story deserves a lot more praise, but Im sure Im not the only one that feels this way!



Author's Response: Heh, sorry about that. That's something I have to constantly work on. :)

Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 5...Up Close and Personal

I like this chapter. I like the love interplay. While I hope for more violence, this love story is nice too.



Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to lighten the mood a little. But don't worry, plenty of violence is coming up! :)

Reviewer: Blueapple Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

I just like these sort of stories.where there would be a lot giants intercating on a massive scale with the tinies.

 

Keep it up! 

Reviewer: Rodan1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

Great story! I loved it when the giant found a tiny young woman getting out of the shower, abducted her and ate her. Same with the boy on the beach. I have a few ideas you might want to kick around for your story. The giants could have ether giant pets or giant alien servants or both that need to eat. They could have giant robots too that use organic matter as fuel. Maybe many of these tiny humans can be sent off to a nearby giant base, ship, or world where they could be used in expairiments, specimens for varius students in school, the pet trade, live bait, or food. The tiny people that can be stripped, humileated, and finaly eaten are groups of families, couples, or people who are between the ages of 8 to 45. The giants could have fun watching the tiny naked humans having sex, and maybe eating or feeding them to something as they do it. Maybe a bit of mind control or invisibility may help. I hope these ideas help?



Author's Response:

A lot of ideas there! ^-^ some will be incorporated in the story!

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