[Report This]Date: November 05 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 24...Let This Be Your Last Battlefield
I need to review this story more, its fantastic. I live the characters, well actually everything about this story. And with the empress dead I'm looking forward to seeing how Aaron and Leila can continue their lives. Also wish that Atreyu(hope that's how her name is spelled) can get her voice back, I mean everything is futuristic with nanotechnology and whatnot. Its kinda aggravating that she lost her voice... But that's the only thing that is overly upsetting about this story.
aaron
PS I love the subtle foot/toe scenes you've put in here and there.
Author's Response: It great you like the stories about your alter ego ^_^. Some backstory will be in the next chapter but not too much. I wNt to save that for future stories. The reason I took away Atreya's voice was for character development. After Aaron came back from Omega, I saw his character becoming too much like Rogers. This and the fact he was coming off as an infallible leader, had to be fixed. In comes in Atreya losing her voice because of his mistake. It was either that or kill her off and I didn't want that. The shot that took her voice away didn't just sever her vocal cords, it destroyed them. The nanomachines in the story repairs cells not grow them from scratch. It's like mending a tree branch. If broken fine but burnt to ash not so fine. Her future will be seen in the next chapter and don't worry it will be a good one.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 24...Let This Be Your Last Battlefield
Well, what the actual fuck? BEST CHAPTER TO THIS DATE! Thank you for making such good contents. Your stories eased ma pain through this fucking hard time, and im loving it. A real writer. You are a real, one of a kind,awesome writter man.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review :) for years I lurked on sites like these and it occurred to me that I could write a story of my own. The creative process is a learning one and man did I learn. Either it be paragraph size or patience, people's reviews taught me a lot. For awhile I was disappointed in lack of reviews but then I noticed the view count. Just because there's not many reviews doesn't mean no ones reading or enjoying the story. It feels good to have your creation take a life of its own but it's better when the reader says they look forward to more or in your case brightens their day. Thank you Invoker for the kind words. Now you have an account, think about a story of your own. Doesn't matter if it's good or bad to the reader. It's your creation and that's what matters.