Date: July 20 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 16...Speak like a child
You really like messing up your characters by just putting them through hell and such.
So much killing going on, you don't held back on killing kids do you. Part of me thinks that brave of you to take it to a place like that and another part dosen't like the killing of kids in such a way not one bit.
i got too far in the storie to stop reading, am hoping for a nice ending once this story is done and the war has come to an end.
I wasen't much of a fan on the story that took part before this one and didn't like the ending of it. So am hoping for a nicer ending for this story.
Am happy to see that people on both sides can get along and be friend and work their way up to more than friends like some of the characters have done.
I do enjoy the sweet moments between the ingress and humans be it a male ingress and female human and the other way around between a female ingress and a male human.
Just thought to give you my thoughts on how the story is going and my thoughts on it. As well some nice words on what i enjoy of it. Since its been sometime from my last comment on it. Also to let you know that some are still reading it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for you review. :)
I put my characters through hell so they can grow stronger from it or to give them motivation to fight. In Jack's case, it occured to me that every war has child soldiers in it and this one shouldn't be different. Then the question was how do you motovate a child to fight in a war in this future? The reasons now are ethnic, national, religious, or economic but with these reasons gone in the future of the story what do you use? The answer was revenge. That reason is timeless.
As for killing kids, it was necessary to justify a kid fighting a war or to show how bad the bad guys are. It's not enough to say "I'm 10 years old and i want to fight" or "I'm evil for the sake of evil". It occured to me when i read the stories here that they have a giant or giantess rampage through a city and they talk of death of men or women. What, the kids and elderly happen to be out of town that day? As for the ending...It will end on a good note but who will be around to enjoy it or what will the price be? That's the question.