Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 Blue, Grey< and all in Between Pt. 2

I will like to see more Ned, he needs more time in chapters even if he is not one of the main charters. After his break out maybe he goes and finds that human girl if she is doing fine.

Also latter when Aaron is most likely fighting Lilith Ned shows up dragging a boat behind him like a bad ass (like in pacific rim) as just smacks Lilith in the face and takes her legs out from under her. Aaron says thought you were not a soldier and Ned says am not watches too many fighting movies. Maybe Ned is a bit more buff than what a lab tech.

But don't kill him off, he is so far the only nice Ingress male.

Author's Response: Well I can promise you that Ned won't be killed off he will have a decent part to play in the next chapter. As to will he be a nice guy well....let's just say he'll be a changed man after all that torture he went through.