Reviews For Invasion
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Reviewer: anaio1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

Excellent story. I hope you make more like this and you focus on the cruelty of giant people to the human. Congratulations



Author's Response:

Actually to celebrate over 100k views I plan to do a follow up of this.

Reviewer: xmandavid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

Expand more on the Omega's 

I had a very long review but it got erased, :( 

Keep up the good work



Author's Response: You'll definitely see Omega again just not in the upcoming chapter.

Reviewer: The Invoker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

Oh yea forgot to tell ya, like what you said on my early review, dont get down if u got few reviews, like me before, many are reading ur story but only few managed to vreate an account to tell how awesome ur story was. And to the other people who didnt put up a review, theyre probably thinkin that this is one of the most rad stories ever. JUST LIKE WHAT IM THINKIN RIGHT NOW! :)

Reviewer: The Invoker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

I mean author (on the earlier review). Cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: The Invoker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

Hi! I used to read this story of yours (no account or any) and got a bit afraid that you're not uploading anymore chapters. I made this account just to tell you to PLSS UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS! Dont stop creating such good contents plss!

Author's Response:

I didn't stop ^-^. This chapter was so long it took awhile to write here's the next one now.

Reviewer: The Wiseman Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

Shaping up to be a top quality sequal also liked the RA3 reference "kick the tires and light the fires" 



Author's Response: Heh caught that huh? :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

This story is really great! And im loving the newly established love beween gts and human...Here is my issue with this story:

Its intimidating to read!

It took me till now to man up and read this, and its all because of those massive word walls! They make me want to give up, especially when I lose my place and have to skim till I find it again.

SERIOUSLY, break up those giantess-sized paragraphs into smaller, more manageable, bite-sized ones! Really, this story deserves a lot more praise, but Im sure Im not the only one that feels this way!



Author's Response: Heh, sorry about that. That's something I have to constantly work on. :)

Reviewer: Blueapple Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

I just like these sort of stories.where there would be a lot giants intercating on a massive scale with the tinies.

 

Keep it up! 

Reviewer: Rodan1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins

Great story! I loved it when the giant found a tiny young woman getting out of the shower, abducted her and ate her. Same with the boy on the beach. I have a few ideas you might want to kick around for your story. The giants could have ether giant pets or giant alien servants or both that need to eat. They could have giant robots too that use organic matter as fuel. Maybe many of these tiny humans can be sent off to a nearby giant base, ship, or world where they could be used in expairiments, specimens for varius students in school, the pet trade, live bait, or food. The tiny people that can be stripped, humileated, and finaly eaten are groups of families, couples, or people who are between the ages of 8 to 45. The giants could have fun watching the tiny naked humans having sex, and maybe eating or feeding them to something as they do it. Maybe a bit of mind control or invisibility may help. I hope these ideas help?



Author's Response:

A lot of ideas there! ^-^ some will be incorporated in the story!

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