Date: June 28 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins
Excellent story. I hope you make more like this and you focus on the cruelty of giant people to the human. Congratulations
Actually to celebrate over 100k views I plan to do a follow up of this.
Date: December 17 2014 5:46 AM Title: One Shot...The Meaning of Family
It was a very sweet chapter, i was looking forward to this one as i wanted to see how Amanda and Ned would get along as father and daughter.
Over all enjoyed it but just getting tried of all the killing and raping going on, its been going so much now part of me is just getting tried of reading it, i know its part of these stories and its going to happen anyway but i tend to rush through those parts.
Dispite everything Amanda and Ned went through, am happy that they have a happy ending to their part in the story with a family.
You have been doing a good job on the story. I do enjoy reading it and like the fact that you added and worked in giant males into the story.
Date: November 13 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 25...Dawn of a New Area
Bit sad to see the story come to an end, it was a good story it had its bad moments in it that i could have done with out, but i did enjoy the fun and good moments that happened in it.
Not many stories around here that have giant males in it and happy that this one has both in it, thats why i enjoyed reading the story and that you did a very good job on it.
Am sad the story has ended but i have the one shot stories to look forward to reading.
Date: November 06 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins
Oh yea forgot to tell ya, like what you said on my early review, dont get down if u got few reviews, like me before, many are reading ur story but only few managed to vreate an account to tell how awesome ur story was. And to the other people who didnt put up a review, theyre probably thinkin that this is one of the most rad stories ever. JUST LIKE WHAT IM THINKIN RIGHT NOW! :)
Date: November 05 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 24...Let This Be Your Last Battlefield
I need to review this story more, its fantastic. I live the characters, well actually everything about this story. And with the empress dead I'm looking forward to seeing how Aaron and Leila can continue their lives. Also wish that Atreyu(hope that's how her name is spelled) can get her voice back, I mean everything is futuristic with nanotechnology and whatnot. Its kinda aggravating that she lost her voice... But that's the only thing that is overly upsetting about this story.
PS I love the subtle foot/toe scenes you've put in here and there.
Author's Response: It great you like the stories about your alter ego ^_^. Some backstory will be in the next chapter but not too much. I wNt to save that for future stories. The reason I took away Atreya's voice was for character development. After Aaron came back from Omega, I saw his character becoming too much like Rogers. This and the fact he was coming off as an infallible leader, had to be fixed. In comes in Atreya losing her voice because of his mistake. It was either that or kill her off and I didn't want that. The shot that took her voice away didn't just sever her vocal cords, it destroyed them. The nanomachines in the story repairs cells not grow them from scratch. It's like mending a tree branch. If broken fine but burnt to ash not so fine. Her future will be seen in the next chapter and don't worry it will be a good one.
Date: November 05 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 24...Let This Be Your Last Battlefield
Well, what the actual fuck? BEST CHAPTER TO THIS DATE! Thank you for making such good contents. Your stories eased ma pain through this fucking hard time, and im loving it. A real writer. You are a real, one of a kind,awesome writter man.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review :) for years I lurked on sites like these and it occurred to me that I could write a story of my own. The creative process is a learning one and man did I learn. Either it be paragraph size or patience, people's reviews taught me a lot. For awhile I was disappointed in lack of reviews but then I noticed the view count. Just because there's not many reviews doesn't mean no ones reading or enjoying the story. It feels good to have your creation take a life of its own but it's better when the reader says they look forward to more or in your case brightens their day. Thank you Invoker for the kind words. Now you have an account, think about a story of your own. Doesn't matter if it's good or bad to the reader. It's your creation and that's what matters.
Date: November 04 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1...It Begins
Hi! I used to read this story of yours (no account or any) and got a bit afraid that you're not uploading anymore chapters. I made this account just to tell you to PLSS UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS! Dont stop creating such good contents plss!
I didn't stop ^-^. This chapter was so long it took awhile to write here's the next one now.
Date: October 25 2014 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 23...No Regrets
EliteIts funny, all this time i dislike Lilith and when her time came i felt a bit sad to watch her go out like that.
I was hopping they would be able to blow the ship up and end it. I didn't see the Elite being a male and being the best, coming.
You have been updating the story much sooner than you did in the past months. Three updates in this month alone.
Date: October 20 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 22...You Kill an Idea by Killing the Symbol
Thank you for the Happy Birthday.
It seemed you updated the next chapter much faster this time around. Was the virus for the healing of the ingress something you planed from the start or did you felt like removing their healing a last minute thing?
How did they get the ingress to the moon and just how fat is their heads from the top of the domes when they stand up?
Will Eve be as tall as ingress or will be she be a bit smaller than them and will there be hybrids that had a human mother and an ingress father and how tall will they be?
Just wondering what is the lifespan of an ingress?
Nothing much else to say about Rogers and omega they are all priks.
When i thought up the idea for the Ingress i wanted them to be a real threat to humanity. Then later on i realized i might have made them too strong. The purpose of the virus was to bring them down to our level and to make them closer to humans. Of course this will play a part in the final battle.
The Ingress got to the moon by shuttle launch. Since the moon has been shipping weapons and mechs there must be transports big enough for an Ingress. As for hitting thiir heads on the dome. The dome is pretty high; easily 1000 ft. or more. Now since the moon has 1/6 Earth's gravity, someone 200 ft. tall could easily jump 1000 ft and posibilily hit their heads on the dome.
Eve will be as tall as her mother but that won't be the case for all hybrids. Like any child, some will take after one parent more than the other.
Ingress lifespans will be the same as humans.
If you don't like Rogers and Omega then you'll love what happens to them in the next chapter!
Date: October 13 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 21...Genesis
Its good to have an update as you posted it on the 12th on that happened to be my birthday.
Most of the chapter was nice but the last part with Anya and Rogers, left me with a bad tast in my mouth, just getting tired of him and Lilith but happy that he took out Anya.
Author's Response: Well Happy Birthday! Don't worry. You won't have to put up with Rogers for much longer. Not to give away much but he will have a fitting ending to his story. I figured what will come of him he deserves one last crack at Aaron.
Date: September 30 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 20...A Gremlin's Gotta Do What a Gremlin's Gotta Do
Letting you know that you still have people reading the story and that the little amount of reviews should not let you stop doing the story.
I didn't think the humans would have a hard time breathing in the building, i was thinking that it was 5 miles to a human but shorter to an ingress also that their planet would have air still up that high.
If not, you saying that the ingress can breath in more thinner air than a human can?
I look forward to hearing that secret orgins of the Ingress, if you are going to tell how they came to be or something.
Author's Response: Thanks for still giving me reviews. I really do enjoy them. When I envisioned the Ingress homeworld, I wanted to include the ability for humans to be able to survive there. That's means things like gravity, atmospheric pressure, temp etc. would have to be like Earth. Now assuming the air pressure is the same in a domed city, it would stand to resin the higher up you went the thinner the air would be. The average altitude one could naturally breathe extends to 8000 or for some adapted humans like Peruvians 12,500 ft. After that, hypoxia sets in and eventually will kill( unless aids such as drugs or air canisters are available) . This is why jets are pressurized and even bomber crews wore air masks. So a building 5 miles up wouldn't kill a human immediately but would kill them within a day. The Ingress, because of their size, adapted to this problem (most likely by more lung tissue and alveoli, and superior cardio systems). Whew... long answer but it was a good question. Other questions on how the Ingress came to be will be answered I. The next chapter.
Date: July 20 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 16...Speak like a child
You really like messing up your characters by just putting them through hell and such.
So much killing going on, you don't held back on killing kids do you. Part of me thinks that brave of you to take it to a place like that and another part dosen't like the killing of kids in such a way not one bit.
i got too far in the storie to stop reading, am hoping for a nice ending once this story is done and the war has come to an end.
I wasen't much of a fan on the story that took part before this one and didn't like the ending of it. So am hoping for a nicer ending for this story.
Am happy to see that people on both sides can get along and be friend and work their way up to more than friends like some of the characters have done.
I do enjoy the sweet moments between the ingress and humans be it a male ingress and female human and the other way around between a female ingress and a male human.
Just thought to give you my thoughts on how the story is going and my thoughts on it. As well some nice words on what i enjoy of it. Since its been sometime from my last comment on it. Also to let you know that some are still reading it.
Thanks for you review. :)
I put my characters through hell so they can grow stronger from it or to give them motivation to fight. In Jack's case, it occured to me that every war has child soldiers in it and this one shouldn't be different. Then the question was how do you motovate a child to fight in a war in this future? The reasons now are ethnic, national, religious, or economic but with these reasons gone in the future of the story what do you use? The answer was revenge. That reason is timeless.
As for killing kids, it was necessary to justify a kid fighting a war or to show how bad the bad guys are. It's not enough to say "I'm 10 years old and i want to fight" or "I'm evil for the sake of evil". It occured to me when i read the stories here that they have a giant or giantess rampage through a city and they talk of death of men or women. What, the kids and elderly happen to be out of town that day? As for the ending...It will end on a good note but who will be around to enjoy it or what will the price be? That's the question.
Date: May 24 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13...The Enemy of my Enemy
I hope when Ned does find find Amanda she can help him, as i don't really like what Ned is doing.
I like how the Ingress are coming around and wanting to pair up with a human for a friend and as a mate.
Date: May 03 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 Blue, Grey< and all in Between Pt. 2
I will like to see more Ned, he needs more time in chapters even if he is not one of the main charters. After his break out maybe he goes and finds that human girl if she is doing fine.
Also latter when Aaron is most likely fighting Lilith Ned shows up dragging a boat behind him like a bad ass (like in pacific rim) as just smacks Lilith in the face and takes her legs out from under her. Aaron says thought you were not a soldier and Ned says am not watches too many fighting movies. Maybe Ned is a bit more buff than what a lab tech.
But don't kill him off, he is so far the only nice Ingress male.
Author's Response: Well I can promise you that Ned won't be killed off he will have a decent part to play in the next chapter. As to will he be a nice guy well....let's just say he'll be a changed man after all that torture he went through.
Date: April 11 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 10...When It Rains
What happen to the Ingress male Ned? Is he still around with the human girl he was looking after?
Honestly I forgot about him :) Thanks for pointing that out. I can use him for the next chapter seeing how dark it will be. Interesting to see what will happen to a nice guy when pushed too far (hint hint).
Date: March 23 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 9 The Empire Strikes Back Pt. 2
“What is that cross-shaped thing on its back?” Aaron asked. “Sharp eye. That is the BITS.” he said. “BITS?” Aaron asked confused. “Beam Independent Targeting System. They separate from the body and independently move via thrusters and target its own enemy. Useful if you’re surrounded".
nice Gundam Referance :3
Finally someone caught that! :)