[Report This]Date: February 04 2014 10:56 AM Title: Ch. 22 'Jims Last Resort'
Poor Jimmy! But, at least he went out swinging.*
*I hope she develops a real obvious shiner. She'll probably tell others it's a mole! But, she--and we--will know better. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks Cary! Ole' Jimmy, at least got one, real good 'Crack-in', before he went down! Ya gotta' give him that! ;)
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 10:12 PM Title: Ch. 22 'Jims Last Resort'
Interesting. I think this is the first story where I have seen a tiny person actually commit suicide without a sexy ending.
Also, since Bob is swaddled up and left alone, perhaps, we can have an "accidental" butt crush where Bob cant escape as he watches the gigantic mass of flesh form a shadow as it slowly descends on his trapped, helpless body. (Just s suggestion). :)
In addition, I noticed that you mixed up Diane and Sandra's names at the second to last line of this chapter. I bet that happens often when you write a lot.
Anyway, another great chapter as always and now Bob gets all the attention. Cant wait!
Author's Response:
It's been corrected, Thanks Tom! As far as Bob getting all the attention... remember, Chloe still has yet to use her 'dose', and Jenn has about ten doses left to use, and... do you think that Sandra's done yet?
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 6:39 PM Title: Ch. 22 'Jims Last Resort'
At least poor jimmy went out went a fight! It was obvious that he was suicidal...in all honesty, he may have been a sleezeball but I dont think he deserved the treatment from Sandra, death was a better alternative. And in almost complete contrast is Dianes treatment of Bobby in this chapter...Hes being handled as if he was expensive china!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Jim was used to being the one in charge, not the otherway around... When he found himself totally at the mercy of this fifty-foot tall, Blonde Bomb shell, and her devious treatment getting more and more spiteful by the hour, he just couldn't see any other way out of it...