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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 8:14 AM Title: Ch. 21 'Bathtime'

Actually, the Focker trilogy is about the _only_ three of her movies I've unapologetically boycotted! Although, that's more because of Ben Stiller (who reminds me too much of Adam Sandler, sometimes).

Author's Response:

Yeah, I've only watched a small part, of one of them, (I can't remember which one...)  but, I really can't say... Ha! 

* I just wanted an excuse to say, 'Focker Freak!' LOL! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 4:55 PM Title: Ch. 21 'Bathtime'

You know who should play Diane in the movie version? Teri Polo. Talk about smoking hot!

;-D

Author's Response:

''Pam FOCKER? ''   :0''. - as in meet the Fockers'?   Oh nooooooo.....  not another Focker freak!  ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 1:53 PM Title: Ch. 21 'Bathtime'

That was intense! This chapter had so much detail and so many descriptions compared to mine. As I'm writing my next chapter I guess I will slow it down a bit. This is a great example of what I believe you want to see in my writing.

Great chapter. Cant wait for the one.

Author's Response:

Yeah, some might call it 'over-kill',    but,... I like to take the reader right into the heat of it all!  That's what I 'try' to do, anyway... there's always room for improvement!

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