[Report This]Date: January 28 2014 10:16 AM Title: Ch. 17 'Diane's Rescue'
I've always said that exercising women look sexier in black leotards. ;-)
[Report This]Date: January 27 2014 10:36 PM Title: Ch. 17 'Diane's Rescue'
I like this intimate start with Diane, but she needs to sound confident and sexy like she knows all the moves or something. A mother of five should have had plenty of experience. Diane's behaviour reminds me of a teenager who discovered pleasure.
There are plenty of moments where Bob is thinking, but I would like to see some thoughts from Diane. For example, im a panties fan, so maybe she could be thinking, ("You know", Diane thought, "I know exactly where to put Bob to hide him for the entire day"). (Then Diane says to Bob, "Little man, I got the perfect spot to hide you from Carly. You will be completely safe".) Then you can insert a narration, "Little did Bob know what Diane was talking about, but he felt reassured hearing that it was safe". (Just a suggestion. I enjoy a confident Milf).
Lastly, I hope Bob falls through the cup into her underwear or something similar. Or you can surprise me. :)
Keep it up, I like your commitment to posting rapidly.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2014 10:29 PM Title: Ch. 17 'Diane's Rescue'
He can't catch a break, I guess if he did the story would've been over by now.
Ant great story and plot line, can't wait to see more.
[Report This]Date: January 27 2014 6:43 PM Title: Ch. 17 'Diane's Rescue'
Well, no help for Bob from this crazy family. The way things are going, he's probably going to end up going native, since he's probably losing faith in his fellow man.
Author's Response:
Going Native! _ '*.*'_ Maybe so... but what about Jimmy? heh heh heh... ;)
Date: January 27 2014 5:45 PM Title: Ch. 17 'Diane's Rescue'
I doesn't seem like poor Bobby's ever gonna find someone that actually wants to help him! Not that I'm complaining, since it's what makes the story!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadgetmawombo, jus' keepin it Real! ;)