Date: February 10 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story. How are things going on the next few chapters?
I haven't picked this one up for a while I'm sad to report Diesel.
I've been busy with a lot of other life stuff lately I appologize.
Date: January 02 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this story. I enjoy your writing style very much. I like the Giantess speaking in caps. It does give the feel of size. I like your slow style and I am waiting anxiously for her to pick him up. How small is he? I assume he is pretty small.Being shrunk by a scientest who really does her work is scary. Will she eventually do things to him scientifically without putting him to sleep? I like the reward if you are good and punishment if you do not listen. You have set up both chacters very well. Looking forward to more.
He's about BLANK inches tall.. He, he. She will be measuring him shortly and this will be revealed to you then Diesel.. And yeah, about the all caps I don't get what the fuss is over but the scientist is acutely aware of the volume of her voice in regards to his extremely tiny ear bones so will be offering him a remedy in that regard that will not be so very high tech but very practical and down to earth.
I agree with you about the scientist and all of the creepy potentialities that her character along with her philosophy about her subjects opens up. A lot of potential for real horror there.
As to whether she will do things to him while he's awake, rest assure that she will. Her main concern in the beginning is to get people past the Go Insane shock. Once that seems to have passed the person probably will wish that they initially had.
I'm very happy that you like this story so far Diesel and hope that you will continue to enjoy it as it twists and turns into the abyss of terror.
Date: December 30 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved the pace of the story and can't wait for more chapters from this. I personally loved the characters in this story but my only complaint is the caps lock when ever Violet spoke but I understand that you were trying to show the size of her compared to Mike. And, like others reviewing this was looking forward to the multiple giantesses ruling over Mike and Violet eating Mike or another smal person or have another giantess eating them. But anyway, this is definitely one of the best giantess stories I have ever read. Definitely looking forward for more chapters for this.
I like to sneak Vore in when it's least suspected. Also, Vore is very difficult to pull off because of the plausibility factor. Because let's face it, woman as well as most men, simply don't like to eat too many living creatures (at least in western cultures they don't). They like for them to be killed first and then ate, let alone someone of their own species. And if they do this we've traveled into the world of cannibalism. Cannibalism is not common.. It's not even uncommon.. It's extremely rare and done when there is no other alternative upon a dead victim.. Not one that is still living and breathing (although there are exceptions and those are rare even for cannibalism should we take things through a historical precedent). So a bit of finess is required here so just stay tuned for that scenario when it happens as I can not forecast that yet and wouldn't even if I could, he, he.
As to the ALL CAPS you are just going to have to be patient until I can (and will) work in a reason that will make doing such a thing un-necessary. Believe me, it's no fun typing it in but I feel that the reader must be constantly reminded of the magnitude of volume that Michael is experiencing for the first time in such an evironment. So unfortunately you'll just have to bear with it for now but not forever.
Finally I'm very glad that you like this story so far as I do plan on adding more to it in the near future so not to worry about long gaps between chapters for now. Thank you for your review Toxenisfun.
Date: December 29 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow this is great. I can't wait to see more. Especially love the attention to detail as well as the pace. Its progressing realistically.
PS does the FF tag mean that Violet(believe that was here name) has an assistant or intern?
Thanks a lot for your patience Aaron as I'm a big believer in realism so one of the draw backs of that principle can be slow starts. But it's the price you pay if you want plausibility and character development.
And as usual, nothing gets past you guys. :) The FF tag does indeed leave open the possibility for other players in this game or lab so to speak. My congratulations to your attention to the subtle hints that are out there for this.
Thank you for your support once again Aaron.:)
Date: December 28 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hey Crocodile, glad to see you've put another story up! This sounds like another suspence filled tale. I really like the set-up, gives the impresssion of one of the first 'Land-o-the-Giant's' episodes. Scientific in nature, the giantess not only has sheer size to her favor, but intelligents as well...
Michael's reluctance to accept his new reality, and his frustration really explains how he feels about this strange hostage situation...
Great start, can't wait to dive into this one too! ;`)
Thank you very much Wildcatman.. Once I get this story past the teething pains I plan on taking great pains to present Mike's point of view in this situation with all kinds of little nasty surprises for him and the reader alike!
Also I just wanted to get this one rolling too and not let it get too tied up by the other story that I have on ice for now.:)