[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Can't stand Julie, hate her so much.
Nice chapter, I had to reread to story to know what was going on. And find how much I hate Julie.
Author's Response:
Julie's a total bitch. My dream girl.
Haha.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love the new chapter! An ominous place to leave it, in a great way.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, Binary_Prophet. Hopefully a few more surprises in store!
[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm hesitant to feel sympathy for her. She's been putting him through some horrible experiences.
Author's Response:
I definitely agree with you there, but Chuxi seems to be more magnanimous than you or I! Then again, I would probably relish the opportunity to switch places with our little protagonist (pervert that I am).
You also should write a story so that I can review it haha. (Looks like my offer isn't much of an incentive if nobody reviewing has their own stories; maybe authors on this site tend not to review others' work?)
[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man, you better not leave us hanging for months again with a cliffhanger like this! I gotta say this turn of events are not what I expected, but the incoming exchange of words between them fills me with anticipation. This has got to be one of my favorites.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Orpheus! I think next weekend I'll have some time to put together the next chapter. I know pretty much exactly where it's going -- just need to get it down on paper, so to speak.
You should also write a story so that I can review it.
Date: August 24 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
I eagerly await new chapters from this story whenever I check this website. Characters are wonderful and the writing is excellent. I was sure I knew where this story would go after the last chapter, but the latest installment proved me wrong. Right to the situation, and then didn't have it last too long, ending with a surprising cliffhanger. I didn't think the story would go the direction it seems to be going with Julie. I hope this story keeps going.
One thing, I do wonder if you could enlighten as to what size Chuxi is. I can't seem to figure that out, unless I missed a detail somewhere.
Author's Response:
I barely mentioned it early on, and have sort of glossed it over since, but Chuxi is roughly four inches tall -- probably a little less than that, actually.
As for the main action of the story, I realized while writing the chapter that there's no way Haley would allow Julie to get too far with her antics. As for where it's going... well... you'll just have to wait and see!
Anyway, thanks for the review! You should write a story so that I can review it.