Date: December 23 2013 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Merry Christmas to you my friend.
Personally I would love to read about his ten days with Katie.
Author's Response: That'll most likely come after a prequel filling in the three-month gap between the first two stories.
Date: December 23 2013 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice 'End-ing', Mini-shirt pocket.... ;`) Merry Christmas to you, too Cary!
Author's Response: Thanks! As I told Mr. G, above, I'll probably detail Cal's ten days with Katie after depicting the first three months of his captivity with the Thorp sisters.
Date: December 23 2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice story. Would defiantly like to read more. After re-reading the "prequel" to this, I was rather shocked by the time skip. It seemed a lot happened during the intervening time and I would like to read about the process of "training" them.
Author's Response: Well, maybe I'll draw some inspiration from TinyDann, and write prequels to fill in the gaps. Until then...Happy Holidays!
Date: December 20 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Mmm, kinda tight space to be trapped in. Japanese butt-crack very tight, very sweet though..... I wonder what will happen in the dressing room? ;`)
Author's Response: Well, the story has to live up to its punny title, somehow. ;-D
Date: December 20 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I always knew you'd be a natural for the humour required to send up the Twlight Zone, ever since you reviewed my Twilight Zone and Timescribe Zone yarns.
And it looks like Dalton might be up against the butt of all chokes.
Date: December 20 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Madame Zephilia? I though Zeph was a Dude! Ha! Anyway, sounds like Cal and Wild Bill are in for some butt-action.... ;`)
Author's Response: The letter "a," as a nomenclatural suffix, is usually feminine in nature. So, it was not an unreasonable conclusion to jump to.
Date: December 20 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
You had me hooked at the about the 14th sentence. "keepers" was the word. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story.
that name zephilia rings a bell? anyone in particualr or just a made up name?
Author's Response: She's a relatively new member of the website. And, the only one on it who actively requested a sequel to "ALL'S FAIR..." which makes me slightly concerned for her sanity. LOL!