Date: April 01 2014 2:19 PM Title: Fitting In
Wicked story cant wait for the next chapter you are good at this!
Author's Response:
Sorry, but this is a one-and-done sort of story. If the guys over at giantessfan would have turned it into a comic, I might have done sequels for it, but for right now this is a standalone chapter.
Date: December 02 2013 3:28 PM Title: Fitting In
Methinks it shold be a bit longer
Aaaaaand the formula in latin is weird, but I'm not sure if it was meant to be correct :)
Other than that it's good -- for some reason compared to the other script I felt like I had to slow down to imagine the pics; quite strange, but totally worth it.
Author's Response:
I only wrote it as 15 pages because
A: That's what the people at GiantessFan say the length of a comic should be.
B: I thought they might be more interested in a short story like this than a two parter like Performance Reveiws.
It did feel a little bit condensed, especially for my style of writing.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2013 8:46 AM Title: Fitting In
It's a good story but, it's hard to get enough detail because of the format you've chosen to write in. This would be great if there was some sort of animation series alongside it and this story really could come to life but it struggles to do so in this format.
Author's Response:
I wrote it as a comic hoping GiantessFan would make it, but they never did.
Date: December 02 2013 12:49 AM Title: Fitting In
Billy Zane is the name of a real life actor who among other things played the bad rich guy in the movie Titanic. He's a lot older than 18.
Author's Response:
Purely coincidental.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2013 7:19 PM Title: Fitting In
If could make a suggestion:
Screenplay format is cool and interesting, but it's not that big on description. I would suggest you put this in prose form and add more description. It's way more fun that way
It's a great idea though I love shrinking out of clothes stories
PYS
Author's Response:
It's actually comicbook format. I personally don't like that style of writing, but I would have LOVED to see GiantessFan make this a comic. They weren't interested thoug.