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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2013 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4: Endgame

I've been trying to sort my thoughts for the last few minutes, but I think I've got some sort of writer's block (possibly due to most of the action being squeezed in a songle chapter :)

 

So, well... wow!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 4: Endgame

It's a great short story,  could be drawn out into several more detailed chap's, but you allowed the reader to experience the 'first-time', along with her, as she selected her first captive, and even gave her reasons for 'choosing' that particular victim.

Her blackmail tactic, even more devious, forcing her tiny helpless mortal man to choose his own life- to ultimately be given to her as a sacrifice.....Willingly!

Amazing combination of desire, and erotic domination.  ;`)'''

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: Deity

Pretty awesome short story. I bet I can guess what the last chapter is going to be like.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TinyT Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3: Deity

This story is epic so far! It could be so much more. I hope you reconsider and keep it going!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you like it.  This story just has one chapter left but more than likely I will bring back Chelsea for other stories.

Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 3: Deity

This story is so fuckin' radical Jacksmith. Like, honestly this is perfect, from name to setting. Keep it going, and if you're doing that thing you do where you time delay chapters (and I know for a fact that you do) STOP IT IT'S ANNOYING AND LET ME JUST READ THE GODDAMN STORY JEEZ.



Author's Response:

Patience, madam, good things (or in this case, really violent things) come to those who wait.  Plus I promise this time I actually still need to edit the last section.  Thanks for the stars.

Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Mind

Holy crap. Masterful setup, I absolutely cannot wait to see where this is going.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  The rest will be up soon.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Mind

I really hope you made Chelsea out to be an unlikable character,  because I'm really hating her right now. Her kind of person brings nothing but trouble to those undeserving of it. If she wins, I'll be very upset!

But hey, rule 43, amirite?



Author's Response:

Trust me, if readers don't hate Chelsea, then I'm not doing my job right.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Mind

Wtf? zero comments???
Oh, well, you did mention it's a short story, so I guess everyone's waiting for the remaining chapters...

Author's Response:

This first chapter is just the set-up, so people may prefer to see some of the juicier bits before commenting.

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