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Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 4:19 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

I'd rather leave the details to you, but something like stacy puts a target on some toilet paper where they get pushed into some unaware giantesses urethra only to be washed out later in the day, or placed on a stick of deodorant or in clothes and is caught up stuck to an unaware girl's skin as she does sports or something.

But yeah, just thinking out loud. I wanna see where you take the story next. Looking firward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 8:18 AM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

When I read the ending of chapter two I just had to write. The ultra-micro shrink and the nose death... so good. I'd've loved to see some more detail on that, but the brevity works well. That kind of extreme shrinking, plus some unusual bodilu functions or unaware situations (placed by the main character, shrunk to almost nothing, and then an unaware encounter... so great. I'm really excited to see what comes next. I vote for some ultra-micro unaware asshole interaction, or failing that urethra or armpit would be interesting, if hard to set up. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

thankyou for your kind words and don't worry there will definitely be asshole interaction in an upcoming chapter as i really loved asshole and butt. Also, what exactly to you mean by urethra and armpit specifically. Is there anything you specifically want to see?

Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 10:59 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

Awesome start, man! I hope ther will be some unaware scenerios involving other unaware people crushing, in-shoe stuff!



Author's Response:

of course there'll be unaware, i LOVE unaware ... most of the time. yeah, i'm thinking of doing some unaware with the mother as her daughter uses her to get rid of people. anyway, thanks for the compliments and i hope you continue to enjoy =)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 9:53 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

Loving it, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, man!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2013 4:52 PM Title: Stacy + shrink ray =

This is such a great start full of action and potential. I'm looking forward to the vore.



Author's Response:

thanks! yeah, i have so many ideas for this story and a few of them contain vore so don't worry.

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