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Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2022 4:43 PM Title: Nervous Breakdown

This is a great story you have here. The development of the relationship between Kate and Emma has been very realistic, in a way that a lot of stories don't get right. Sad that this story is long abandoned, but at least what we got was very good.

Reviewer: omicron20 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 10:32 PM Title: Nervous Breakdown

I just read this chapter and the previous one. I really like the way you are slowly building their relationship. It wouldn't make sense for Emma to instantly trust Kate. Also, I think Emma's reactions bathing seem spot on. 

The only thing that confused me was Emma being surprised that Kate was human. I assumed she knew she was shrunk, not in another place with giant people.



Author's Response:

Very good for catching this! This will actually be explained in the next couple of chapters. ;)

Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 9:14 AM Title: Nervous Breakdown

^_^

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