Date: November 06 2013 10:09 PM Title: A SMALL INVESTMENT
sorry, just got carried away there...
Author's Response:
So did Carycomic in his poetic review, and I liked them both.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2013 10:06 PM Title: A SMALL INVESTMENT
Ah, the sweetist of sweet, the giantess' snack; the tiny little man whom escaped from her crack. Only to be captured once more, by her foot on the floor, she pressed her toe's down and pinned him to the ground. He wriggled and struggled and put up a fight, but he still ended up her snack for the night....
Ahh, Ha ha haaaaaaaaaaa.... HA! ;~)..
Author's Response:
Presumably a foot fetish verse about either my Dyna Girl / Gordie relationship or my BJ / Brad relationship in the story poem?
Well written anyway! One question. How did who get into whose crack? I didn't cover that in my version.
Date: November 06 2013 6:20 PM Title: A SMALL INVESTMENT
Or, as the increasingly absent Amanda might put it: you leave me "Austruck."
X-D
Author's Response:
Aus-struck in this country. Good one.
My latest take on this stuff is up on most recent. The first chapter's not that entertaining, but that will come in the other 7 for sure.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2013 2:32 PM Title: A SMALL INVESTMENT
There is simply no dispute
That this ode, to superheroes past,
Gives overdue resolution
To a show that, sadly, couldn't last.
Therefore, five stars I award you,
To show how glad I am.
Indeed, this is probably the finest poem
I've read...since "Green Eggs And Ham."
Author's Response:
Reviews full of praise, and never abuse,
Comparing me with the well known Dr Suess,
Is just what I need to inspire me to write
The next time an idea comes into my sight.