[Report This]Date: September 25 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Favorite parts are when Icarus is smaller, like around the size he is now. And when Icarus and Terra, spent time with each other. And when Terra teases Icarus.
Least favorite thing, would have to be short chapters. I can't think of a bad part.
I think Icarus use to be a prince, that's how he has all these memories.
His sphere is like his core or chakra. Since he is connected to Terra. She can control his magic etc.
A request would have to be.... Maybe have a break or side story that's a couple of chapters. Where Terra and Icarus go to a hot spring and have some fun. Plus Icarus is still a couple of inches tall.
Two secret that Icarus can never know. Is what happened in the fire at the castle place. And how much Terra weighs.
The treasures abilities, are like protection, strength.,increase size and decrease, replenish magic. Basically any super power you can think of.
Well this is my longest review. I really like the chapter. Icarus he sure doesn't know how to stay out of trouble.
Terra teases Icarus a lot, you should have Icarus give her a taste of her own medicine.
Thanks for the chapter, have a nice night or morning or afternoon. Whenever you read this review :)
[Report This]Date: September 25 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
ok well i have not reviewed this story and im srry bout tht, cause i really love this story. By far one of my favs right now. so on to answer some questions
Fav moment was when Icarus looked backed at terra when he freed her.not sure if this really was my fav but to me he did alot for her, a stranger.
I think icarus is like some sort of...idk lol he does seem to know a lot of elven things tho.
the treasures probaly have some op abilities than inhance the senses of the user.
i think his sphere is like his soul. thts why he reacts to it.ps hope terra plays with it more.
one request i have is tht terra gets more aggressive in trying to get icarus to like her. not mean tho.
not sure about the other questions tho. need more time to think on those.
again i love everything about this story. maybe terra and icarus can have more fun together with their size difference
[Report This]Date: September 25 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wohoo! Thanks man!
Author's Response: No prob
Date: September 25 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
What is your most/least favorite moment in this entire story: Terra freeing Icarus from his former owner
Who/what do you think Icarus is: Maybe the last decendent of an elf king?
Who/what do you think Raphael is: No idea
What abilities could each treasure have: No idea
What is Icarus’ Sphere: His soul
If you had one request for the story what would it be: Terra grows :)
What theories do you guys have: None
What are the two secrets that Icarus can never know: No Idea
Author's Response: All I can say is that one of your answers is correct and another will happen.