Date: October 28 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 Epilogs
Ha! I was right! I was off slightly, but I knew that Linda and Jenn would finally get together... (there was just too much sexual tension) Great way to break up that last chapter (Epilogs) the split story line creating even more suspence as the reader nears the ending...
The funeral was very sobering, and it really touched a nerve. I felt a connection to the little people, after all your defined character development, they really seemed to come to life.
You could have easily went on for several more chapters- just with Linda and Giantess Jenn, taking their everyday sexual excapade's to all sorts of different places. Ah well, the story was about Jenn's 'Home Invasion', and you finished that up very eloquently!
Great Giantess Story!
Date: October 28 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Nice! You do really well at drawing out the little details, above and beyond the call of duty. As a result the story really drew me in. Unique too. The giant submissive doesn't show up that often in this genre - for obvious reasons, haha.
I did like the ending, although I was a bit disappointed that she never got free while the whole group was there :) The giant/tiny interaction was somewhat restricted to "murderous" and "helpless" with not a lot in between.
I'll keep an eye out for anything from you in the future...
Date: October 28 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
I was hoping for Jennifer going full scale revenge on the tiny people who tortured her but that's OK since she's really the 'sub' kind of person.
It's a shame though since that would have been material for at least 5 more chapters. Ah, well. Ending this story hopefully means you'll write a new one soon? Please do. I love your style of writing.
Ending a story in time is propably a better way than to drag it out without any real end sight as where I am stuck at the moment...
Date: October 27 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
assuming that Linda had crawled under the stove... Oh, I think maybe she decided to stay a while with the giantess Jennifer, the two females had made a connection of some sort, while Linda held her captive within her own apartment naked and bound, she was somehow reduced to the tinies level, and therefore accepted by them, (aside from the accidental squashing of the foot fetishist Ed) and Linda felt her tiny pussy tingling as she watched them 'Punishing' the bound giantess...
Maybe Jennifer would like a tiny pussy licker. Linda, she could get right into it ...;`) I'm sure!
Great story! I hope to see alot more of your tale's...Carnaj2!
Date: October 26 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 9 Another Invasion
Reminded me of 'Willard' too... Nasty fuckin rats are tough little bastards. I once saw one cut completely in half, and it still managed to crawl away about 50 yards into a drain pipe and get away! My brother had chopped it across the back with a garden hoe, and was actually lucky enough to hit it, and the sucker still got away... well, his upper half did any way!
Fuckin horrifying to think of a rat any larger then what they already are!
Horrendous chapter Carnaj, fuckin horrendous... :(
Date: October 24 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 Punishment
Very nice, I love seeing new chapters of this even though the role reversal (innovative though it is) isn't really my thing. You do a good job building tension with the combination of her helplessness and how completely outclassed they are whenever she's able to move a little bit.
The "post-apocalyptic" hardened band of survivors is great, it's like you mixed The Walking Dead and The Borrowers. I love this universe.
After chapter 4 I really wanted her to adopt Linda, or just put out leftovers for them every once in a while and occasionally have a movie night. I don't think that's gonna happen any more, LOL.
Date: October 24 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 Punishment
I expected them to shove the curling iron up her ass.
Yeah, this was justice, but if Ed would have thought about it a little more he wouldn't have been killed, unless he had somnophilia on top of feet.
Date: October 24 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Wow, let me tell you what wow. This is very impressive and a WONDERFUL story. I absolutely LOVE how you switched the roles here. Usually it's the tinies who are getting tortured and are helpless as some uncaring and cold hearted giantess haplily tortures them. But this? This is a beautifully done role swap. I actually hope Jennifer gets free and shows those tinies a thing or two, starting with Linda. Maybe not kill them, but certainly punish.
Date: October 22 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 Crime
Damn it ED! Fuckin foot fetish, it'll get you kilt everytime! Ed should have gently awakened the giantess by climbing up onto her side and massaging her chilling nipple's intill she roused awake... then, she would have most likely enjoyed a little foot play with the little bugger...
Ah well, such is the life of a tiny foot freak, Ed just found out the hard way!
Great Chapter Carnaj2 ! I hope that they don't kill poor Jennifer, maybe just spank her a little bit, and twist her enormous nip's... ;`)
Date: October 22 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 Crime
Uh-oh... methinks Linda will have to make a tough choice very very soon. Despite their bloodthirstiness I still sympathize with the others, so you have me at the edge of my seat here.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: October 21 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 'Ever Lovin' Saturday
Totally got me hooked now. Both the band of tinies and Jennifer are mostly sympathetic so far. Very curious as to how this will end, will she get out early, will she end up "adopting" Linda? Or will one of them cross the line? Who knows...
Thumbs up again!
Date: October 20 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 Discovered
Linda's life being so similar to Jennifers is a strange realization, except for the size differance of course... the poor pregnant Anne being with child that will eventually kill her is a horrifying consequence!
You've painted a very realistic storyline here. The survival instinct of the tinies is fasinating. The varying size of the affected 'tinies' is something to concider 'useful' for a rougue group of individuals. They could definitly use that to their advantage...
I love the way that you've discribed the tinies and their personal plight. Makes me wonder if anyone would have any compassion for them, in this day and age...
I love this story... Great work Carnaj2 !