Reviews For Kali Corp. 4
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Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2018 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 0

Was going through my reviews and saw your joke about another 5 years lol well im still here :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 0

PS: is there a way one can edit one's posts? it looks silly to see so many reviews titled "Chapter 0"...

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 0

A part of it (no spoilers!) was really disturbing imho -- but hey, it was supposed to be, so I guess that means you wrote it well...

Other than that it as just GREAT!

I especially loved how chapter zero surprised me when I saw how it fit in the story, and the GRATE puns(*), and many many more tings; but the main point is, the whole story reads well.

And it fits in the series, kinda like a marathon... you said this will go up to part nine, right? XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

 

(*) Mostly because I couln't understand them a few years ago, and now I've learned another meaning of "venting" :)

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 0

I did not see that ending happening. I loved the inshoe and all the foot material in this.

5 years!!! I admire your dedication and advance planning for your stories...now that i think about it thats kinda like my xmas story except without the advanced planning part. I'll update it eventually but I certainly didnt plan it to happen like this?



Author's Response:

thanks. This is really the only story I have ever planned ahead. And made charts of the plot and character development. It's not that it takes 5 years of planning, it's just that after I write a Part, it kinda drains me and I usually don't get back into the story for about a year. It's mostly the lazy summers when I write Kali Corp.

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 0

Love the series but is there gonna be another, great job with this story i read it from start to finish in one go

Author's Response:

oh wow that's great. Sorry I had to take a break from reformatting it there. Yes man, there is going to be 5 more parts plus lots of extras. Unfortunately that may take 5 more years :/

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