[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 9:11 PM Title: Girl Talk
'Whew', just read this straight through... Nice suspense, and it's drawn out perfectly. I like the different discriptions or names for the dark cavernous recession centered within the tightly spaced wedge of giantess Amanda's rearend...heh,heh,heh...
The way she talks, in the last chapter (4), sounds like he's 'goin-IN!' regardless of weither he wants to or not!
Great work dude, look forward to the con't....
Author's Response:
Thank You! I tired to write this differently from how I usually write in a way that's never been done before. There will be many more descriptions of The Spacial Crevice between her separated bumcheeks leading to the Cavernous Aperture of Amanda's Hidden Back Passage Where the sun dont shine. ( theres only so many times you can write butthole, asshole and anus.)
How could he not go-in after that?
[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 8:15 PM Title: Girl Talk
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 2:08 PM Title: Girl Talk
Awesome, this story is absoulutly amazing! I wonder how he fells after hearing all of that? Can't wait, again, for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
All of that??? :D
[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 1:51 PM Title: Girl Talk
I absolutely have no sympathy for what this guy is going to endure. Now, cleavage; that's a different story. But, the butt...???!
Author's Response:
No sympathy? At all? Wow and I thought I was cruel because I was writing it :)
Date: December 13 2013 8:49 PM Title: The Shrinking, Spying and Realization
Knowing you Mr.E I can tell than next chapter is going to be heavy on the action
Author's Response:
Action? I consider it action but most people might not? However this is a point of view from the giantess that is rarely brought to attention and I'm glad I was inspired to write something unique like this. for example: why does a girl want to have a shrunken man in her butt in the first place? how does that thought even enter her head? this story gives one (realistic???) example of how that could happen.
Date: December 13 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Devious Plotting and Planning
The amount of dialogue in this story is a bit higher than your usual works. then again considering we haven't reached the shrinking chapter yet this is to be expected.
Author's Response:
I'm trying to change my writing style for this story compared to my other unfinshed story that is 100% unaware. I wanted to make this mainly a dilogue story and the girls talk about what they would do to him and they guys reaction and response
[Report This]Date: December 13 2013 8:39 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
I've been missing a lot so I decided to go on a review streak.
Now, as for this first chapter. I can appreciate the classic first person giantess story, and how casual everyone in this story is about the shrinking.
Plenty of action and none of the "OMG U iz Teh smalls" which I think is this stories greatest asset
Author's Response:
I tried to make it as realistic as possible but it's really hard for this genre. normally if a girl finds someone shrunk she'll probably help him or keep him as a lovon pet but be really gentle with him. It's rare to find a really cruel gts who would torture them like you read about in some of the stories on here (mine included)
however I wanted to see how I could tun that normal situation into what I 'm doing now.
Amanda probably would have helped him if she found him shrunk, if that perverted first conversation had never happened, however now that might not be the case? if you check out the most recent chapter with her in it you'll see why. the following chapter details it even more I'll try to post that one soon
[Report This]Date: December 12 2013 11:56 AM Title: The Shrinking, Spying and Realization
Wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next!
Author's Response:
Thank you I jst posted it. I'll try to get the next one up soon
Date: November 11 2013 5:22 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
Another great chapter! Looking forward to the next update and keep the teasing up. ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you! This story will have a lot of teasing
[Report This]Date: November 03 2013 10:33 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
I love this, I hate waiting but it is worth it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It might be alittle while, but I updated my other story in the meantime
[Report This]Date: November 03 2013 7:56 PM Title: The Devious Plotting and Planning
Really liked the plot so far. The whole shrinking pill, how that guy wants one and doesnt really care about the antidote/what could go wrong, totally being ignorant/stupid, is really great. Especially liked the idea of Kristy planing to never tell anyone about his maybe disapperance if that happens. Looking forward into this story now (:
Author's Response:
Thank You! I put a lot of thought into this one and i tried to cover any plot holes!
Date: November 03 2013 12:46 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
Nice new chapter. you asked who I was on writing.com, this is me
http://www.writing.com/main/portfolio/view/flamesfanatic
Date: November 03 2013 11:33 AM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
This is a freakin awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter....but as a fan of your work I must ask.. Will you be finishing "Christmas Eve at my cousins feet"? Cause that is hands down the best story on this site!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! the next chapter will be up within a month?
Yes I will finish it but I dont know when? It will be a long time, I have a lot to go through. I'll try to add a chapter in before Christmas. In the meantime I'm trying to keep myself motivated by writng new material.
Date: October 17 2013 9:40 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
Really looking forward to your next chapters! Keep up the great work and great captions.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I just added another chapter
[Report This]Date: October 17 2013 7:30 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
It's wonderful to see you back again! This was amazing, definitely one of your best!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad to be back writing again.
One of my best? Wow, thanks a lot! I think you'll like the next chapter
Date: October 17 2013 6:56 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
I reall liked htis, and hope you get the next chapter up relatively soon/ I've contributed a few chapters to your stories on Writing.com, and really enjoy your written work, keep up the awesome stuff, and don't make us wait too long for chapter 2!
Author's Response:
Thanks! it's up now. What's your penname on writing.com?
Date: October 17 2013 8:27 AM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
I really like how this is going!
Author's Response:
Thank you!