Date: July 15 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
RIP, David. :-(
Date: April 26 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
What got me confused was the transition. One moment, Shaun isin't a bathroom, in deep shit, Zarelda frequently assaults him. Then, in the next moment in another chapter, he is rescued. After that, a bunch of characters get introduced, and while I'm trying to get clarity on their rules and positions and even remember their names, the story begins to limit Zarelda, a strong character actually being in the story, conversing with other characters. And while all this is happening, I begin to forget why and what exactly the protagonists are doing to stop her.
Date: April 10 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
His life doesnt sound so bad to me?
I'm glad you're writing again.
Author's Response:
Thank you! That really means a lot coming from you. I love your stories and no it doesnt seem half bad to me either haha.
Date: April 09 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great to see this back.
Date: April 09 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Welcome back. It's good to see this story continue. Are we going to get confirmation of what happened to David?
Author's Response: Yes, there will be confirmation of David's fate. And thank you