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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Whew! What a close call. I think I'll stop here, for the night. Keep my appetite whetted for more.

Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. And as to that pun, no, it was not intentional at all haha

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

I think Zarelda will definitely flip, probably start looking for him so that he doesn't foil her plans. Or she could just carry on with her plans.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

Good to see this story come back, and the last bit moved the story forward nicely. Trying to escape right in front of Zarelda, though, seems like really bad decision making. Escaping with Kyrie when she wasn't around was much better.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love the way this is shaping up, good stuff.



Author's Response: Thanks!

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