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Date: July 08 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Will you ever add to this series? This was a good start if you were planning on doing so.



Author's Response: Yes, I do plan on continuing this. The sequel is actually already in the works. I just haven't had much time because of my other stories.

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Date: July 15 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

P.S.---you're not a downer, Shaun. Everybody knows that, sooner or later, even the half-full glass becomes completely empty!*

*See? That would've been a whole lot funnier if I had gotten it right, the first time. ;-)

Author's Response: Actually it wasn't even Shaun that said that. It was Victoria haha still funny though

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Date: July 15 2014 11:47 AM Title: The Rise

OK! It's official: I'm hooked. Enough, so that I--almost literally--cannot wait for Volume 2.

Although, I really wish she had kept the black jacket and red bikini. ;-)

Author's Response: Great! I'm happy you're on board. I hope to make the sequel even better than its prelude. Things only get crazier from here.

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Date: July 15 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 20

Excellent! :-D

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Date: July 15 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

Intense! :-)

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Date: July 15 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

RIP, David. :-(

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Date: July 15 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was sweet. :-)

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Date: July 15 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well, that was an unexpected turn of events...to say the least. As for Shaun's so-called dress? Just think of it as a purple toga, dude!

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Date: July 15 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

He could always have climbed down to the floor, and then shimmied up the lamp cord.*

*I don't know of any real-life night stand that _doesn't_ have a lamp on top of it.

Author's Response: I figured he didn't want to risk falling from the bed while trying to climb down.

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Date: July 15 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

It sounds like Zarelda might have to become a "lady" of the evening. ;-)

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Date: July 15 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yeah, right. Like you weren't inevitably going to be discovered by Kyrie's female roommate. Even without the foot geas.*

*An actual folkloric term for a magically-induced compulsion. Usually pronounced "gaysh."

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Date: July 15 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Maybe if he mentally pictures Kyrie's feet...

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Date: July 14 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Whew! What a close call. I think I'll stop here, for the night. Keep my appetite whetted for more.

Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. And as to that pun, no, it was not intentional at all haha

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Date: July 14 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

You should have entitled this chapter:

"Shaun of the Ped."


*Ba-DUM-Boom!*

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Date: July 14 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'll bet one of those things is the town water supply. :-(

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Date: July 14 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

What? No binding and gagging him while he's unconscious and at her non-existent mercy? That's a bit disappointing. ;-)

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Date: July 14 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is the fastest slow-shrink process I've ever read of, here. Nice touch! :-)

Btw: was that an intentional pun when Zarelda said "Could you put me on the couch _when you get off_?"

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Date: July 14 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'd hate to be Shaun when he finally wakes up.

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Date: July 14 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

Let me guess: he's going to go to a toy store.

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Date: July 14 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ungrateful little beeyotch; isn't she?

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