Reviews For Fleeting Love
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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2015 8:53 PM Title: Summer Lovin'

Forget Athena, I just wanna read more of Alexis's game! and johns but more so Alexis because it is her first!



Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you are enjoying it. Both games are going to last a good bit longer. Athena and her plan certainly will come back into play soon.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2015 6:43 PM Title: Love's Captives

Athena's suitable timing better be getting closer. Even faking it, I don't think Jon can last through another chapter of this. :-(

Author's Response: Jon isn't currently aware of the plan, remember? Athena altered his memory. He does not consciously know there is one. So he's not exactly faking it.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2015 8:48 AM Title: Summer Lovin'

I personally can't wait to see what game Aphrodite decides to have Alexis play :D. Can only imagine what is in store for her!

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see my friend! Who knows what went through Aphrodite's evil mind? ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 7:50 PM Title: Back to Hell

I hope Athena allows him to remember, pretty soon. Aphrodite is getting a little too big for her toga, if you know what I mean.

Author's Response: Indeed she is. But Athena's plan hinges on its timing.

Reviewer: Minigts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 2:52 PM Title: Back to Hell

I enjoyed the sizes in this chapters, and your character development has been fantastic. I both sympathize and empathize with Jon in his struggles. Keep it up and I look forward to reading future chapters.



Author's Response: As always thank you. I've recently had A LOT of free time on my hands so expect the next one soon after the next chapter of Goin' Down.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 11:53 AM Title: The Love Lounge

Seriously, though: you have me stumped as to whether or not Jon will have an unhappy ending. That is; will he achieve a Pyrrhic victory over Aphrodite? Only chapter 19 can answer that for all of us, dude!

Author's Response: That is the golden question, my friend! Chapter 19 won't answer that question, but it will bring us one step closer! Expect it soon :)

Reviewer: Minigts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 9:02 AM Title: The New Guy

The amazon women in this section are awesome. More scenes like this chapter please. Really liked reading the explanations for the amazons and their way of life. Good detail. Side note: Jon needs to hold his cum longer and enjoy the moment.

Author's Response: I loved writing about the amazons. It gave me a reason to learn more about them, which was really interesting. The only I part I regret is I wish could've done more with them. But the story must go on. Who knows? Maybe I'll bring them back someday. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minigts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 11:55 PM Title: Summer Lovin'

Forgot to rate

Author's Response: I personally really like Sandra too. She's fun to right. I'm toying with the idea of giving her her own story. Unfortunately, I've already started writing the next chapter at the beginning of the third game. Don't worry though, Jon's going to be small for a good bit. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Minigts Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 11:54 PM Title: Southern Comfort

I really like Sandra. Interesting character with a playful nature. i like the size change effects but sometimes I wish he would stay at a size a little longer. Thats just me though.

Reviewer: Minigts Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 11:46 PM Title: The Love Lounge

I really enjoy this story. Especially with the games right now. I'm hoping to read more with Sandra! Keep it up.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 2:22 PM Title: The Love Lounge

I'm having an even tougher time deciding than Jon-Jon did!

Glad to see you back.

Author's Response: Good to be back. Since no one really said anything I just started writing the next chapter at the start of the third game.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 8:19 AM Title: Decisions

Hmmm! I have to wonder if Aphrodite is starting to suspect there's a plot against her.

Author's Response: Perhaps ;)

Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2014 5:22 PM Title: Decisions

Absolutely amazing! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot. I'll try to put out another chapter as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2014 8:02 AM Title: One Last Game

I mean; have we turned Jon into a _total_ masochist?

Author's Response: Perhaps slightly. Who can blame him with all Aphrodite's done?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 2:03 PM Title: One Last Game

Oh, boy! I think we've created a monster.

Author's Response: How do you mean? Haha

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 1:59 PM Title: All-Out Brawl

In the immortal words of Magic 8 Ball: "Yes, definitely."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 12:16 PM Title: All-Out Brawl

Wow. Just---plain---WOW!

Author's Response:

Is that a good wow? haha

Reviewer: GrowFo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 4:40 PM Title: Summer Lovin'

Great story so far,

can't wait for the rest 

Keep up the great work



Author's Response: Thank you! Always happy to hear someone is enjoying one of my stories. The next chapter should be up in a couple days!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2014 8:46 AM Title: Night Terrors

A-ha! Now, I know who the co-conspirator is; Icelus alias Phobetor. The son of Hypnos--Greek god of sleep--who appeared in mortal people's dreams as various animals.

Author's Response: Icelus is more of an accomplice. The real co-conspirator will be revealed in time. And have you seen my email, Cary?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 9:36 AM Title: Promises & Stalkers

Jon now has to worry about a jealous stalker? This was definitely worth the wait!

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