Reviews For Fleeting Love
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2013 10:29 AM Title: Reunion

Holy Neptune's Trident, Batman!

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2013 5:24 AM Title: Reunion

Nice little chapter.  Ominous cliffhanger.  I was thinking that as a parting gift for all that he's endured, that whoever girl he ends up with in the end should have the power to change his size.  If its a girl he likes, he'd enjoy it, and I'm sure she'd enjoy it.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to see you enjoyed this one. As for your suggestion, I just might use it.

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