Reviews For The Cocktail Olive
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Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 12:06 PM Title: Unexpected Opportunities

I did expect the olive to be her date, but that wasn't the case, and I actually prefer it that way. Job well done. :)



Author's Response:

Why thank you :D  I try to keep things 'alternative' ;)

 

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 8:40 AM Title: Unexpected Opportunities

good story. I like to assume the olive was her date



Author's Response:

The thought had crossed my mind ^_^  I decided not to include that specifically though so people could assume it was the case or not :)  Glad you enjoyed though.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 9:27 PM Title: Unexpected Opportunities

I'm loving this series! Good job at conveying how unimportant the shrinkees are to them. Looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Next one (i -think-) is the human insole one... Dont quote me on that lol. Glad you enjoyed this one though. Danza Macabra (or Danse Macabra) is one of my favourite thought provoking themes or concepts, so to be able to put a series of stories together that suit the title has been really good fun ^_^

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 5:17 PM Title: Unexpected Opportunities

Beautiful and brutal as expected. :D

I have to to give you credit on the spectacular torture scene. There aren't a lot of stories where the giantess uses a mechanism other than her body to maim or kill and I think it really worked to convey just how worthless and pathetic the tiny olive was to her.

Good work DollsizedHarlequin.

 

 



Author's Response:

I wanted to try something new with this, something passive aggressive but still adequately mean enough to fit in with my general style :P

Glad you enjoyed it  ^_^  If you havent seen it, i have a poll on my deviant art page for which story people want to see next, feel free to give your opinion :)

 

http://harlequinems.deviantart.com

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