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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 05 2018 11:33 PM Title: Eruption

That's one of the reasons I'm still single. Once a guy marries, and he and his wife become parents, they immediately seem to get what I call...genetic amnesia. That is; they completely forget what they felt like as teenagers! As a result, they lose most (if not all) of their potential empathy for the stuff their own kids are going to go through as teenagers.

Reviewer: J_O_H_N_J2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2018 10:43 PM Title: Education

i love this last chart! Thanks.

Reviewer: GTortoise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2018 1:18 AM Title: Introduction

I sent some feedback on GC but I wanted to leave a note here as well. These last few chapters have been wonderful. If I seem overly critical at times its only because this story is one of a few masterpieces in the genre and as such I hold it to a very high standard :). 



Author's Response:

Admit it, you just like to offer unsolicited writing tips because that gets you off. Pervert.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2018 10:09 AM Title: Eruption

Another Great Chapter. It's normal Jack exploded that he kissed a (alpha) girl and he's happy and confused at same time. This parental teasing did not help. I hope to see Caitlin soon.



Author's Response:

He kissed a girl, and he liked it.

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2018 4:40 AM Title: Eruption

Well, I hadn't expected it but it's probably the best which could happen to Jake. His family knows about Penny (partially) and while he erupted at their poking, it's a reaction I can perfectly understand (I've that kind of temper myself, even without traumatic rape event). I must say I'm surprised at his Mom's insistence that he should be with a Beta girl however... Madame, where do you expect him to find one ? It's mandatory for girls in the U.S. to become Alpha, at least since your son's generation ! Get a grip on reality !

Now, I can't wait for them to actually meet Penny. But I think that this chapter foreshadow a confrontation with Caitlin, somehow. Jake is coming together, even if he hasn't realized it yet. I think that if Penny manage to protect him publicly from the redheaded's attention, we could go be sailing for some serious nightmarish stuff for our hero. I don't know why, it's my guts talking I guess...

Anyway, keep the awesome work. Also, I you could loan me a tenth of your writing skills, it would be great !



Author's Response:

The increased awareness now takes the story into interesting territory - his parents don't *know* anything about the girl, but they know Jack has a female Alpha friend - and this opens up avenues in future, even if it's just them asking about her. Up until this point they only really know Jack has Delon as a best friend, so this is a big development for them, which they'll interpret as a big positive, and maybe see as validation that Alphas and Betas get along and their boy is just fine (little do they know). 

Jack is an introverted, sensitive type anyway, so don't expect sunshine and rainbows from now on, but there is now a solid core to his self-belief; Penny has validated that he is a good person, and worthy of love and respect. Caitlin still lurks around the corner, but he has Penny and Delon both fully aware and ready to act, so it just remains to be seen what will happen next... oooooh!! 

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2018 8:45 PM Title: Eruption

Of course the Dad get's the brunt of the hate here and somehow gets blamed by the Mom. Honestly he only said one screwed up thing at the end and it was a joke and had nothing to do with the fact that Penny was an Alpha. It more more like a mean-spirited "that's mah boy" sort of thing for bringing a girl to the house.

The mom on the other hand was passive agreesively attacking Penny for being an Alpha and implying that she wouldn't be good for her son for a good while before the dad uttered a peep. Imo, she was much more antagonistic but that's just how I see it.

Anyway if ONLY the parents knew what their son had REALLY gone thru, it's not even funny how much they don't know!



Author's Response:

Awkward parents be awkward. This is based on (but not the same as) real life experiences I've had, kindof exaggerated for effect but grounded in something real. Jack's parents just seem out of touch, like if an elderly relative makes an inappropriate (racist/sexist) remark without really understanding why it's no longer acceptable, and that the world has changed. Jack's Mum routinely applies parental pressure to her son, whether over his education, or here with his relationship prospects, without really thinking of the consequences. Jack's outburst happens because he finally has something 'real' to hold onto, and the very idea of it becomes the basis of jokes and teasing by the two people he knows the best - they simply have no idea. 

The passive-aggressive remarks about this girl being Alpha/too tall for him by his mother, are based on real life conversations I had at this age when I was exceptionally fond of a girl who was a few inches taller than I was, and took her to our final 'prom' (I'm British, it was called an End of Year ball). 

Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2018 8:15 PM Title: Introduction

Those last couple of chapters were very emotional and kind of sweet (and I know, as a guy, I probably shouldn't gush too much about one little kiss, but that one was a little slice of awesome). Oh, and I'm pretty sure I'm in love with Penny.

These chapters could come off as maybe a little too sweet and cuddly, but they don't because, no matter how sunny things look between Jack and Penny, we can always feel the spector of Caitlin looming just around the corner.

Nicely done.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's definitely a fine line with how saccharine these chapters come across. I'm sure I'll read them back in a few months and feel like I was being really wet, but then I'll read them even further down the line and be really moved by them - it depends on the mood I'm in tbh. 

As for being in love with Penny - I mean - she's almost like the perfect foil for Jack specifically - but in a wider context, regardless of her being female, or tall and pretty, she's is a person who truly cares, makes an effort, and is trying to overcome her own insecurities, a lot like Jack. Most people want to root for a person like that, or would welcome them into their own lives with open arms, let alone as a romantic interest. I worry sometimes, as mentioned above, that it's all way too sweet and gooey and 'nice' - but these characters have developed this way organically, funnily enough - I like to think they've grown to this point by reacting realistically to the situations they've found themselves in.

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2018 7:43 PM Title: Eruption

Really nice to see this story continuing.  Love the chemistry between the gentle giantess and the semi-shaken protagonist.  Wondering if there will be a heart-pounding return of Caitlin, and whether or not Penny will be able to swoop in to save Jack from her clutches (just kicking around the idea box if you haven't set anything in motion yet).  Again, glad to see this story picking up after a short hiatus.  Looking forward to more soon.



Author's Response:

Caitlin will return. I won't say when, though, or in what capacity.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2018 5:21 PM Title: Eruption

This chapter is....tiring.

Not because it's bad but because of the rollercoaster of emotions Jack went through in one day! One moment is the greatest of his life and the next he's questioning his self worth and full of resentment! Come up for air Jack!



Author's Response:

Yep, pretty full on. I've had days a bit like this, but you are right... it's too much to handle, hence the outburst. I hope people don't get utterly drained by these chapters, but at the same time, this is what my story is about... I hope it can provide an insight into what it is like to live through intense emotions (I regard myself as someone who wears their heart fully on their sleeve, for better or ill, and a lot of me is tied up in this story).

Ultimately, Jack needs rest, his brain needs a break. Fortunately that is exactly what he's about to get...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2018 7:07 AM Title: Affection

Stop just a moment.  Do you feel that? 

That happy, warm feeling you’re feeling right now...Imagin8 gave that too you.  You have invested your time and attention in his story of Jack and Penny (and others) and he has rewarded you awesomely. 

So, just a take a moment to enjoy it, how you feel right now.  It is a brilliant artist’s gift to you.  You’ve earned it.

This story has been made up of such contrasts and yet such subtle details.  It is a pure pleasure to read.  While we’ve shared Jack’s journey into extreme darkness, we also get to see him approaching the heights of joy.

I love that Penny was able to open her heart.  She’s been so terrified of herself that I think helping Jack has allowed her to see her own potential as a wonderful human being and not some over sized...thing.

Jack is also showing us such courage, still.  He’s able to take risks with his heart, even now, when he is so fragile and so dependant.  Yes, Penny has encouraged and motivated him, but still, he’s so courageous in a heartfelt way.

Of course, there’s more to come.  While we are so happy to see Jack and Penny begin on the path of romance, she is also really committing to Jack’s side, they are on a path of real danger.  When you view this scene in terms of the whole story there’s an element of suspense.  How are they going to be able to actually be romantic and enjoy each other with the creature looming around every corner?

But enough about ...it.

This is one of those moments.  I can see all the fans of this story, as we read chapter after chapter, referring to this moment as “the kiss.”  We’ve waited for it and wished for it and it’s beautiful.  Jack and Penny have the kind of chemistry that mixes to create a romantic explosion that reverberates through our imaginations.  Those of us who are writers and those of us who just enjoy the reading have a new standard of excellence.

I, for one, will always remember this.

 

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

Are you trying to win an award for best review, Pix? :P

I might have to review your review.

Oh my days. Did your heart just burst? That's right. Pix just shot you in the chest with an EMOTION BULLET from her FEELS GUN. She wrote a beautiful review that Imagin8 didn't truly know how to respond to so he resorted to CHEAP PARODY and LOLZ to try and cover up how much it meant to him to read a review that called a chapter of his silly wannabe erotica novel 'a new standard of excellence' with a straight fuggin' face.

Seriously though, it's humbling to read things like this. I almost want you to stop, because if you don't, I'll literally turn in chapters that say 'PENNY LOVE JACK WOO' and expect universal acclaim. That is, of course, if I haven't already reached that stage. You'll have to read Ch.34 to double check.

Thank you, Pix, you always dedicate time to reviewing this story, and I could not be more humbled that you do.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2018 10:01 AM Title: Introduction

Finally Jack is connected with Penny good chapter!



Author's Response:

Cheers!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2018 8:02 AM Title: Introduction

Now THIS is podracing! 



Author's Response:

Don't get cocky.

(This is my favourite review)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2018 7:36 AM Title: Affection

Next chapter: "Houston? We Have Lip-lock!"

Author's Response:

34. Separation

Jack is stuck to Penny's face...

Reviewer: johnrussi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2018 1:56 AM Title: Affection

Wow sir.

It only took me around an hour to read through this beautiful, gripping tale. I have so many thoughts going through my head. I don't blame your update schedule (As you noted in some of your chapter end notes) for being so spastic, every single chapter of this story is quality.

Normally, I really dislike regular giantess stories, adaption and growth is more of my forte, but this one provides the kind of adaption that I truly enjoy. Jack, Penny, Delon, Alex, Caitlin, all of them are great characters that make me feel different things. There are so few of them that provide meaningful roles but all of them feel so impactful. The shock that half of the story is Jack's traumatic experience is insanity to me, the fact that he could also live through it is mortifying.

Caitlin is a titan, a bully, of course you've hinted there is more to her character from Jack's asking about her hand holding and his probing. I have to wonder what it is.

All of the scenes with Jack and Penny just felt so incredible. They felt so special, so wonderful to hear how they confide in one another, trust each other, and how it all culminates in that kiss that readers have waited in real time for years for. It''s truly magical to feel that kind of emotional connection to two characters, ESPECIALLY ones like Penny and Jack, whom compliment each other's negative sides flawlessly.

Needless to say good sir, this story is unreal. I haven't been so gripped by a piece of giantess fiction is so long, and I'm eagerly awaiting more. It gives me hope that my own story, Puberty, will evolve into a tale as gripping as this one, because you tell so much with so little, and I love that about GH-X2.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Enjoy your perfect score sir, and welcome to my favorites list



Author's Response:

Thank you for a... mega review, it is hugely appreciated. I am really pleased you enjoyed the Penny and Jack scenes, the story is so divided between the Caitlin-centric parts and the Penny-centric parts it sometimes feels to me like two halves that don't match... but reviews like yours reassure me that they add up to a whole that juxtaposes and draws from both sides. 

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2018 1:34 AM Title: Affection

Wow, things are progressing quite well between Penny and Jack. I'm really glad to see them both growing as characters like that. I really feel that a girlfriend who truly loves and cares about him will do wonder for our little Beta's main character, especially when she has basically told him that she loves him the way he is and wouldn't want him to be an Alpha ! In the meantime, I would really like to see Penny talking with her newly found boyfriend's parents, I think she could help them realize that their son doesn't live in the same world they grew up. Now, the question is, will we have a battle of the century between Mama Bear Penny and Feral Wolf Caitlinn ? I suspect that the answer is a yes, but I can't wait to read it anyway ;)

Speaking of the resident red-haired Queen of the school, I can't help but feel that you present her overwhelming presence so well. Just the sight of her sneakers terrified Jack, and Delon got afraid just seeing her face hovering above the rest of the Alphas. It really gives her an aura of intimidation which makes her so much more than simply a bully. For Jack and even Delon, she seems to be more of a mythological threat than anything normal, and I find it awesome. I also can't help but notice how, when something physically bad happened to Jack when he was abducted, Caitlinn face was almost always obscured.

I really does wonder to add layer to this character. I'm thinking especially about the pool scene (which sent Alex over her friendship to help rescue Jack). For the Beta, Caitlinn was cold and emotionless, not caring at all about his suffering, and we assume it is the case, because he couldn't see her face and we follow his point of view. But we don't know how she reacted truly, and it adds this veneer of mystery, at least for me. Basically, it boil down to two simple questions :

-Does Jack knew Caitlinn as a child but forgot about her like he did Penny ? It was implied in their first encounter that Caitlinn may know him before hand, at least it was my impression reading it again recently.

-Is she in love with him but unable to express it in a healthier way ? There is several indications that it could be the case in the story, and considering their world, the very little tidbits we know about her parents and what she told about men and how she feel about them... It wouldn't surprise me that she felt sick harbouring feelings for a Beta, that she has been abused or at least used by men when she was younger and that her pouncing on Jack is both her way to express her love and her pain. She needs to sort out her feelings anyway, that's for sure.

I think I must also comment on Delon. That guy is basically the best friend everyone would love to have. He's calm, collected, cool under pressure, caring about his buddy and always willing to help as best he could. I really think that him being a solid rock for Jack will help our main character as much as Penny's love.



Author's Response:

The fact she made a point of saying she categorically liked him as a human being is a huge one. There have also been hints that she perhaps is quite fond of Betas or Beta-sized things anyway, but it's yet to be explored... might be a red herring (I've thrown in a few)!

Caitlin is, as you say, practically a supernatural force from the perspective of the Betas. It's not just that she's bigger and stronger than the other Alphas (who are in their own right supernatural-seeming) - but it's her capacity to 'go there', inflict pain, not give a damn about the consquences. Her social standing, aggressive behaviour and connections just make her this perfect storm-like package if she decides to train her sights on you. 

Your point about her face is semi-deliberate, but you've definitely given me food for thought. I've tried to portray Caitlin as someone who presents herself off as terrifying, but has glimpses of humanity, which you've speculated on. Your ideas are ones I have explored in my notes. 

As for Delon, he's an amalgamation of several traits that make him solid 'best friend' material without being a particularly well-rounded or pivotal character. Compared to Penny, he simply hasn't been explored in the same detail, as the plot hasn't required it. In addition, it has to be said that in some respects, Delon and Jack's friendship is a marriage of convenience - two Betas mostly in the same classes - they were bound to be friends even though they're not terribly alike. He's not completely sure how to help, or how to support his friend other than to try and do what's right, but he is a likeable and conscientious fella and gives 100%. He'll never let you down, and that's worth a lot.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2018 9:14 PM Title: Affection

B00M drops the mic! What a chapter, wow. Edge of my seat the entire time. This evolution can bring so many new dynamics and conflict - I wonder if a little mama bear is gonna pop out of Penny the next time Caitlin barks up that tree!



Author's Response:

Review #250 - woo!

Reviewer: johnrussi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2018 7:15 PM Title: Introduction

I read the recent chapter since I saw the review count, now pouring over it. This story is beautiful, I'll provide a more up to date review when I complete my reading of this wonderful tale



Author's Response:

Please do! I would love to hear your thoughts on it, and thank you for your kind words on what you've read so far.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2018 7:00 PM Title: Affection

Beautiful and well worth the wait!

The question is - where do you go from here? As a writer, I struggle once a point of tension disappears. However, as a reader, I sincerely do hope there are more chapters, even if they're just going on picnics and stuff. :)



Author's Response:

Caitlin.

Reviewer: Teemo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2018 3:40 PM Title: Introduction

Waited years for this moment.  

thank you



Author's Response:

I hope it's worth the wait...

Reviewer: lord_ne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 28 2018 11:31 PM Title: Introduction

As a testament to how much I like this story, it’s currently 3:30 am.

Author's Response:

I know that feel, and I'll take that as a massive compliment, thank you.

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