Date: June 27 2021 2:40 PM Title: Resumption
Maybe it's just the long wait since the last chapter, but this feels like the best chapter yet!
[Report This]Date: April 02 2021 10:58 PM Title: Resumption
Up to code yet lol? Sorry, just you got me into this story again. No worries if not. But if it's dead just kill it. Stab it fully, burn it, and bury it deep in the earth.
Also - Caitlyn must like Jack. It's pretty obvious. I hope she ends up with him. Like trains him into being her pet beta boyfriend.
Date: March 31 2021 5:13 AM Title: Resumption
Caitlin's got a sort of twisted attraction or crush on Jack right? Like she wants to interact with him because he's caught her eye and possibly (secretly) likes him. But she seem's to be afraid to openly admit it. Either she knows people like her parents would disapprove (maybe they hate betas) or she's hyper sensitive to her friends opinions (like Amber, who loved hurting Jack). In her weird way she cares for Jack, I think I remember she cuddled with him when she kidnapped him and forced him to stay in her house. And today at school, she immediatly intervened when a different alpha was hurting Jack. But she keeps falling back to violence and threats, even when it's jsut the two of them. Maybe it's because she doesn't realize how easily she hurts him when she thinks she's holding back or how terrifying her threats sounds giving she's already stuffed him in bags and boxes and manhandled him.
I think we will see her learn his leg is injured later (whether because it bruises up of he limps) and she actually shows concern by inspecting it and trying to give him some first aid. Maybe this will be when Jack realizes Caitlin has some kind of interest in him beyond just bullying and hurting him. Question is which friend has more influence on her behavior towards betas, Alex or Amber?
Finally I wonder if Caitlin can take rejection? If she does hit a turning point with Jack, and does start to open up to him, eventually she's going to come to terms with the act that Jack and Penny are already smitten with each other.Caitlin's always gotten her way in life, would she really be satisifed with Jack being with someone else?
[Report This]Date: February 09 2021 11:07 PM Title: Resumption
"Those who do not learn from history are doomed to repeat it."
Author's Response:
"Life is not a spectacle or a feast; it is a predicament."
Date: February 09 2021 4:04 PM Title: Resumption
Glad to see this story has returned.
Great chapter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
I'm working on the next few chapters, rather slowly, but it's coming together.
Date: February 07 2021 8:39 PM Title: Resumption
It's great seeing this story continue and Jack's in quite the pickle now. Still though, I find my sympathy for Jack dwindling for how he keeps taking the abuse. Hopefully he snaps mentally and makes things extremelly difficult for Caitlin. She also has to play a balancing game with how much she can hurt him. If he disappears for too long or has noticible injuries and people start asking questions then the ball is in his court.
I wonder why she's obsessed with him though. Could this be a version of girl teasing boy she likes because she doesn't know how to express her feelings? Anyway, I'm eager to see where this story goes..
Author's Response:
Tbf he avoided her for about a week out of sheer terror and determination, it's not like he just rolled over and 'took the abuse' - not to mention the shock of it all finally catching up with him.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2021 11:28 AM Title: Resumption
Yes! I love it when Caitlin is back in charge. I find every scene with her so entertaining and her torment of Jack just makes me smile since I love her sadistic side.
I thought she might feel bad about his leg, but I guess she just took advantage of it instead.
Even the people that bully Jack are scared of Caitlin, which makes Caitlin all the more powerful.
Now that Caitlin knows that Jack has escaped once before, you know she's going to be extra careful to keep him locked up. I like this idea of smuggling him in her bag. That's a good way to sneak him out.
As for keeping him in her house, she might have to use some decent bondage to tie him up and make Jack completely helpless.
Either way, I'm excited and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Cheers! I'm working on it.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2021 12:53 AM Title: Resumption
It's been awhile huh? I love this story tho. I'm rooting for Jack! He's easy to sympathize with and by extension root for, usually even if the giantess is evil I root fir her because well sexy stuff. But here everything feels more realistic and jack isn't just a fodder for a giantess to stomp to mush so it feels bad when bad things happen to him. Hope the next chapter is soon.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2021 12:53 AM Title: Resumption
It's been awhile huh? I love this story tho. I'm rooting for Jack! He's easy to sympathize with and by extension root for, usually even if the giantess is evil I root fir her because well sexy stuff. But here everything feels more realistic and jack isn't just a fodder for a giantess to stomp to mush so it feels bad when bad things happen to him. Hope the next chapter is soon.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2021 11:45 PM Title: Resumption
Good god what an amazing entry. So happy to see you getting back to this epic story and keeping it alive. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, I'm trying my damnedest to get the next chapter up to code.
Date: February 05 2021 11:09 PM Title: Introduction
Welcome back but Man is Jack in trouble 😅😅 Can't wait to see where this leads🔥🔥
[Report This]Date: February 05 2021 9:40 PM Title: Resumption
Good god what an amazing entry. So happy to see you getting back to this epic story and keeping it alive. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
Date: September 23 2020 6:18 AM Title: Commotion
please continue this wonderful story
Date: September 05 2020 5:28 PM Title: Introduction
This story is Incredible and worth a reread!! I hope Jack finds a way to live happily once this story is over! Please come back and finish when you can!!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 8:36 AM Title: Introduction
Came in expecting to mess with my dick, but the story messed with my heart.
Seriously speaking though, I feel for so many characters in this story and am really looking forward to seeing how things'll turn out.
The writing is superb and the characters have so much depth to them, I can't help but want to know more about and understand them, even the antagonistic ones. Who knows, maybe at some point my wish that they all be friends will come true... yeah, let me dream a little.
I dearly hope you update this story, it's great.
By the way, is there any way to get notified if a new chapter comes out? I can't wait
Date: July 27 2020 10:55 AM Title: Introduction
Please come back to this =(
Favourite story on the site by far.
Date: July 27 2020 10:55 AM Title: Introduction
Please come back to this =(
Favourite story on the site by far.
Date: May 21 2020 8:35 PM Title: Introduction
Damn please update, read through all this on one sittiing don't leave it on this cliffhanger.
Date: January 31 2020 1:18 PM Title: Introduction
this is great cant wait for the next chapter
Date: January 09 2020 5:58 PM Title: Commotion
Oh my GOD you can't stop there! I need to know what happens next!! Please keep going I love this story and I love Caitlin-heavy chapters!