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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 5:43 PM Title: Deterioration

Masterfully poignant interlude.

Reviewer: twitch99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2019 2:08 PM Title: Deterioration

So happy to see another chapter of this story.   This is one of my favorite MGTS stories.  The writing is very good,  I like the storyline and the character development is very good. 

I hope to not have to wait so long for the next chapter.  :)

twitch99

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2019 4:11 PM Title: Deterioration

Your writing quality never slackens. You have a hell of a talent for communicating emotion in your scenes, whether it's fear and pain from Jack's torture, or depression and anxiety over his family issues. That last one in particular struck a chord with me. 

I'm never one to tell an author how to write a story, because you know your own story so much better than I do. I do, however, have a word to say from the perspective of a reader. Jack's been going through so much turmoil for so long, I really want to see things go right with him for a change. I know he's had his moment with Penny, I loved that for the nice change of pace it was. I've gotten to know this guy so well and relate to him, I want to see him happy soon. Keep writing your story how you want it. Make Jack go through whatever he has to go through before it reaches the end, however you've got it planned. I just want to see him come out happy when it's all over. 

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