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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 4:46 PM Title: Reintegration

I waited to review the last chapter and now I’m super glad I did.  They really need to be talked about together.


What we are seeing is Jack overcoming, stage by stage, fear.  All three of the women in his crisis are here, representing his emotional state.  At first we see the creature, in a nightmare (where she belongs) representing his terror.  Once he awakens he settles into a cold dread. He knows he has to face the real thing.  

Once he is in the crucible of school he encounters Alex.  The swaying, unreliable thing.  She represents a sort of uncertainty.  At the end, she shows a small glimmer of kindness.  Jack begins to actually shed some of his dread. 

At the end of the chapter we again encouter Penny.  Jack is not completely free from dread, just as Penny is not free from doubt,  but he begins to maybe even hope.  To see the light at the end of the fear tunnel.

The creature is never even, really, there, and Penny is there for like, a second, but the chemistry between the characters is palpable.  You can feel their presence  and their influence on Jack.  Just as he gets "further away" from his nightmare, he is getting closer to his dream.  This is great writing with deep emotional layers and thoughtful literary complexity.  I am so satisfied as a reader.  Imagine8 has not pandered to us, but treated us like the intelligent, thoughtful audience we are.  This genre can be truly amazing and attracts some amazing talent, that is clearly on display here. 

Imagine8, thank you for your efforts and for your generosity in sharing this with us. 

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

Thank you, Pix, for a beautiful review. I don't think it's half as clever as you're making out (!), but I'm definitely exploring some semi-autobiographical musings on fragility, insecurity, love, lust and fear for the future - albeit within a GIANT LADY setting of my own... perverse imagining.

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 4:01 PM Title: Reintegration

As a person who suffers anxiety, I feel like you've really captured the feeling well - the constant edginess, the crying for no apparent reason, the trembling etc. Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you - I hope it's true to life for the most part. I myself don't suffer with anxiety (though I am fundamentally quite insecure and sensitive around aspects of this fetish) but there are many people close to me who do. As a supportive kind of person, there is definitely some catharsis at play here with the characterisation of Penny, and whilst my intention at the start wasn't to be writing about a neurotic, terrified teen, the 'realism' I crave, and the abusive scenario with Caitlin, have steered the narrative in this direction. 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2017 1:29 AM Title: Reintegration

Another good chapter. thanks for 3 quick chapter updates.

 

About Alex, I'm sorry for my messy post where I did forget words. What I was trying to say was that Alex was like "ok, I gonna help you to make Jack escape but after that I don't want nothing to do with you".

You said yourself: just because she found out that abusing/torture wasn't her thing doesn't mind she's "beta-friendly" now. but if she got a change of heart, 'I'm fine with it. 



Author's Response:

I think, at the risk of straight up telling you how she feels, it's essentially that she's had her preconceptions challenged, at least in Jack's case, so whilst she might be pretty much as indifferent to Betas as before, she's very aware of his suffering in particular. She's not going to go around being nice in public, especially as she has to maintain things with Caitlin, but privately she will look out for him in her own way, even it's a little gruff, like 'get going out of this classroom so I can help you' rather than 'take all the time you need'.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 6:11 PM Title: Reintegration

Penny admires Jack's bravery. She's said so on multiple occassions. 'Courage is resistance to fear, mastery of fear, not absence of fear.' Jack demonstrates this resistance by returning to school, where everyone dwarfs him and at least one wants to harm him.

I suppose he can't just go sit at Cait's table during lunch, but he's lurking around school like a secret agent, constantly on edge, unable to relax. He's got to do *something*, otherwise the tension itself will hurt him.

Of course, I say those things as a reader cheering for Jack. From a more objective viewpoint, the tension you instill keeps the reader's attention and makes us crave the next chapter. So it's a good technique, so long as there is an occassional release to the intense pressure-cooker like situations.

I'm just waiting for Cait to finally appear. I'm *wanting* her to appear at this point. It's like when the guy goes into the dark basement at night to check on creepy sounds. At some point you just want freddy krueger to *appear*, even if the protag takes a few slashes to the face. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 6:08 PM Title: Reintegration

Oh, yeah! He's definitely going to be baby-stepping for at least a year.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 4:20 PM Title: Reintegration

I just watched a show called "13 reasons why" on Netflix, and the show was eerily similar to this story. The characters match those from the show to this story and even the setting is the same. The one thing differing is that the victim in the show commits suicide and I'm wondering if Jack ever considered death as an option since he has been taking shit left and right.

I have been waiting for this chapter for a lot time. The moment when Jack gets his balls back after they were taken from Caitlin. He finally gets on that bus and takes on the daily struggle of school.

Jack sat next to a kid who was 8 or 9? How old is Jack again? Are they both going to the same school? Something doesn't seem right.

Ah, so Jack's vision is so bad that he can only look at Delon's shoes as he follows him. Since Jack didn't want to make much eye contact, his blurry vision may have indirectly helped him.

I still don't know what to think of Alex. I still think she is an enemy and the glasses are just a fake sign of trust. Maybe Cailtin had them remake Jack's glasses custom made with a built in tracker so she can keep track of Jack constantly. Why else was Alex following Jack to class? She was leading him to a trap. Alex should be naturally faster and beat him to the door, but she let Jack go first so she can make sure he doesn't escape. Sneaky alpha girls.

I think Jack needs to workout a little. Or atleast do some stretches. Get that blood flowing instead of feeding the world and cowering. He needs a confidence boost more than ever. If this mental torture continues, I fear he might take drugs or something, anything to ease the pain.

Will Jack get a "fuck it" moment where he just doesn't care anymore? Will he proclaim to the school about the abuse and start talking to people boldly without care? I'm sensing that he might explode on someone with anger. He broke down in tears with Penny and Alex just now, but Jack still is bottling up that frustrated emotion.

Penny has returned to comfort Jack again. I wonder how this relationship will progress.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 3:53 PM Title: Reintegration

Man this guy is a bundle of nerves and reflexes! How much stress can one guy endure? Why can't he just tell some authority already, jeez, why's he putting himself thru all this? Is Caitlin's family influence REALLY that far reaching? At the very least he could get her expelled or something. In the real world people with money don't get away with things completely, they get less punishment usually but not NONE.

For example that Afluenza kid that ran over and killed a bunch of people didn't go to jail like he deserves but he still got 10 years probation even with all the BS influence and money his family held. I don't know, it's the one point of this story that still bugs me abit...Anyway, another great chapter, at least Penny is there to brighten him up abit.



Author's Response:

Point #1 - This is a work of erotic fiction, and if it were a flawless, logical universe, Caitlin would have been prosecuted after touching him up in the bathroom in Chapter 2. End of story. Game over. Exit through the gift shop.

Point #2 - In the real world, people with money get away with things scott-free all the time. I'm not saying this is a watertight argument for GH-X2, but I'm saying it's not an implausible assumption. I also refer to point #1 - this story has been engineered this way to avoid a long, boring legal / police investigation into abuse. I appreciate that you are taking it very realistically and I personally interpret that as a huge compliment, but also remain aware of the fetish and what I'm trying to facilitate via this setting. Injustice is driving this story along.

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