[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 12:16 PM Title: Connection
Penny should surprise Jack. She should get a picture of Caitlin, enlarge it, print it, then wear it like a mask and scare the shit out of Jack. Then she takes of the mask and hugs and kisses him repeatedly(not on the lips) all over his face.
I don't know why I thought of that but I just think it would be a thrill for Jack.
Also, being in the friendzone is better than the Beta toy zone like with Caitlin. Jack is so desperate for love that he sees his only female friend as a lover.
Maybe Penny will change her mind. Maybe her time alone will make her think that Jack is all that she needs and she will start seducing Jack. (I know it won't happen, but just a thiught.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
That would be so mean! I don't think she particularly wants to give him heart failure. You're also absolutely right about the (apparent) friendzone, even if he feels like a lovesick fool and pines for her, she's very kind and supportive of him, and that's a big deal in a world of apparently uncaring giants.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 8:37 PM Title: Connection
Thanks for the head's-up. And, no problema. Even I go through George Lucas Syndrome, every once in a while!
Author's Response:
Ugh - George Lucas syndrome... I hope I didn't inadvertently ruin anyone's childhood or anything. I just reached a point in the story where I thought 'that rounds off the Chapter ok', but then, when I started writing some more, realised it would be way better to end it the way the start of the next Chapter was shaping up.
Probably shouldn't rush so much...
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 5:05 PM Title: Connection
I see, abit better way to end the chapter. Not like it changes things drastically or anything but it leaves on a more thoughtful note. As always, I'm looking forward to updates!
Author's Response:
Cheers - I just felt like I rushed the end of the Chapter a bit, and when I started writing the continuation I felt like it would be much better to end on that note, than start on it.
Date: September 21 2016 12:13 PM Title: Connection
For a second there you had me fooled with Caitlyn finding Jack! I suppose it could still happen...Anyway, kinda sucks about Jack being friend zoned tho, but it makes sense, he's a tiny, would he be able to protect and provide for someone like Penny? Good stuff, I look forward to more updates!
Author's Response:
*EDIT* I've added a short section at the end of Chapter 21, so it ends slightly differently. Apologies - please check it out.
RE: Ha - I'm glad I almost fooled you, was worried it was waaaay too obvious! Friend-zoning is an unpleasant ordeal at the best of times, let's see how it all pans out.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 7:38 AM Title: Connection
Poor Jack! It's not like he's _intentionally_ viewing Penny as a scapegoat. But, the sad fact is, PTSD still takes a pretty long time to get over.
Author's Response:
*EDIT* I've added a short section at the end of Chapter 21, so it ends slightly differently. Apologies - please check it out.