Reviewer: themajestic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 6:46 PM Title: Capitulation

Great continuation! I really enjoyed the interactions.

 

Even though it was not really put into detail and in turn noticeable, I liked that Caitlin kept Jack naked from this scene onwards. It accentuates the "pet" and owner relationship.

Author's Response:

Indeed - earlier on, the nudity is accentuated as Jack feels exposed and humiliated - as he gets wearier and further away from normality, the fact that he is naked becomes the least of his worries and isn't mentioned as prominently. It definitely reinforces the pet/owner dynamic, I tend to think that in this scenario, the giantess being clothed represents power disparity/control, and the stripped Beta exaggerates vulnerability and powerlessness.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 7:12 PM Title: Capitulation

You know that feeling when no matter what do, it won't change the outcome? Well, Jack is in this moment. No matter what he tries to do to escape, he will always be caught and punished. Now he just gives up in this chapter.

Jack had many things before he got captured. He had friends, family, and an identity. Well Caitlin took everything from him, including his identity. Jack kept fight until he lost something special to him. His virginity. Yeah, I know some people don't consider that to be losing virginity, but for Jack, he wanted his first sexual experience to be with another Beta girl, not like this, and Cailtin took that away from him too.

Hmm. I never considered jump rope as a bondage tool until now. I mean, this is an everyday item that most people have and it could be used for some humiliation like this.

When Jack mentioned that his hands were resting above his head, I thought Caitlin was going to tie him up to the bedposts and go for round 2. Perhaps another time.

Alpha food must look like a buffet for Jack. Just one plate may fill him up and he will never have to get seconds. However, Jack does get a meal, on Caitlin's thigh. Then he gets seconds on her foot. Might be worth it considering how desperate Jack is.

Jack said multiple times that he did not want to give her satisfaction of his humiliation. It looks like there is still something that Jack actually has control of. He still has hope. The question is for how long especially with Cailtin being so unpredictable these last few chapters.

The couch scene was nice. Caitlin comforts Jack and it actually doesn't comfort him. Instead, it seems to scare him because it doesn't know what to think of her anymore. Should he feel mad, thankful, he doesn't know. She keeps doing opposite things to him which confuses the crap out of Jack.

I think Caitlin is just breaking him down until Jack just gives up. Then she cheers him up until he gets some energy. Then, she humiliates him again when he starts showing signs of vigor. It's a cycle. She probably enjoys breaking him down again and again and Jack hates it so much.

If I was Jack I would start acting like crap all the time so Caitlin would comfort me all the time. Of course, she might catch on my idea so I would resist here and there, but for the most part, I think Jack can exploit this by faking his misery. Now I wonder if Jack can hear my idea.

As this story goes on, it feels like a social experiment. "Hey, let's put him in the pool". "Hey, let's throw him". "Let's try forcing him to orgasm". "Now let's force him to eat off her foot". "Now let's mess with him and have her comfort him". Well, if this were an experiment, I would say it is going well if the point was to break Jack down.

I wonder what Caitlin has in store for Jack next. I'm loving the bondage stuff (rope, tape, gags, cuffs). Would love to see more of it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There's a lack of consistency in Caitlin's approach that could be explained by a few things. I'm definitely trying to hint at the fact she's just doing what she feels like, and if it happens to be mean, or nice, or sexy, it's not like she's really thinking about it as much as he might think she is - she might just be a bit naive and doesn't really understand how to be very cruel particularly well. It's not in doubt that she has some kind of fascination with him, whether she straight-up likes him, or just likes how small he is, or what it is he represents to her. She's very much a bully, and most of her friends are just yes-men, so maybe she doesn't know how to be normal with him at all, and is just trying to do what she thinks he would react best to, or expects, as an inferior manlet. It's not beyond the realms of possibility that someone has trained her to treat him like this either.

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 6:30 PM Title: Capitulation

Hot damn! Two chapters in one week? And without a dip in quality?! I must have made someone in heaven very happy to be so blessed!  

I don't have much more to add that I didn't already say in the last chapter.  

However, that last line;  

> “Good boy,” she soothed, “Let it out. Let it all out.”  

That was probably the hottest line in this chapter TBH, possibly in the entire story so far.  

I've always felt like sexiness isn't just about events or contrived situations, but about emotions; The fact she's obviously playing a game of "mean-nice/mean-nice" is what makes the humiliation humiliating.

 

Author's Response:

Indeed! It's been a bit of a stretch to get it all written down, but I've tried to strike whilst the iron is hot and it's all fresh in my brain. Chapter 16 has been by some distance the longest chapter I've nad to write so far, primarily because there's no convenient break point until that line. It means you get a load of GH-X2 all in one go, though, so not a terrible ordeal for the reader...