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Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 4:19 AM Title: Culmination

Seriously, how is Jack going to get himself out of this? And this isn't really a rhetorical question.

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2016 4:12 PM Title: Culmination

God Damn. It's like you've reached into my mind, plucked my favourite fantasy, and made it even better!

The way Jack reacts to Caitlin, especially him "finding truth in her words", makes me think this is the start of her breaking him.

If so, I'm excited to find out how Caitlin will continue to crush his spirit, as well as how that subjegation will be presented (as an unconsenting fear of punishment, or an active yearning to be ruled?).



Author's Response:

Haha, you're very welcome! It's very much personal-fantasy-come-true stuff for me, in more shallow terms with both Caitlin's apearance and the size ratios, but also with the humiliation / kinky stuff and the existential 'it would probably suck to be that small' dilemmas as well. Jack definitely seems close to breaking point, it very much depends if he can stay strong mentally, or if he capitulates. It's that crucial.

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2016 8:51 PM Title: Culmination

Great chapter! I wonder how Jack is gonna cope with all this when it's over, some people can end up killing themselves from trauma like this. He's been forcibly raped, hurt, and humiliated and the worse part is that he's probably not gonna get any justice for it. It's hard not to feel sorry for him.



Author's Response:

Certainly this is going to mess with his psychological state. He was already in a bad place about his future prospects, so this will compound that enormously. He has shown a lot of resiliance up until now, but it's beginning to reach breaking point.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2016 6:38 AM Title: Culmination

Awesome. I'm really glad you're still working on this story



Author's Response:

I'll probably be working on it forever, if not, longer! The trail might go cold for a while, but I will try to get chapters out when I have time - there's a lot more to write.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 8:43 PM Title: Culmination

Hooray! A new chapter, at last. And a highly...climactic one, at that.

Author's Response:

Cimactic is the word... !

Reviewer: White Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 7:36 PM Title: Culmination

Great writing, as always. Any chance we will see penny again? I've been checking back every time you release an update in the hopes of the gentle stuff with her.  Either way, kudos on an excellent job



Author's Response:

Not to give too much away, but Penny is very much a key part of this story. I'm sorry it's taking so long to get there, but believe me, it will.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 2:39 PM Title: Culmination

Another fantastic chapter! I love how sexually involved Caitlin is these last few chapters.

In the beginning, it was just physical and mental abuse, but now it's also physical and mental abuse, but this time it is about Jack's sex life in a nutshell.

Caitlin is exploiting his inexperience of sex by showing him how it's done. She does it so fast that she calls it an easy task making it more humiliating for Jack.

Jack wanted his first time with a girl his size so he could remember it as something special. However, Caitlin took that away from him and made him come by force.

Last chapter was oral sex, now it's a handjob. You would think that with these simple positions that the chapters won't be so long but Imagin8 describes these positions beautifully and uses teasing to make the final event much more meaningful.

I understood the positioning this chapter much more clearly when she is holding his legs down with her thighs and using one hand to hold his wrists. I can picture that and how she still has a free hand to tickle him.

This sexual abuse doesn't seem as bad as the physical beating that he endured in the beginning of this story. It's just my opinion, but I find this stuff highly erotic. Loving how she dominates him on her bed.

Her breasts must be bigger than his head. And he woke up facing them! Amazing! So she was awake the whole time and just held Jack there becuase she wanted to. Also, she held him there in that position so when he wakes up, his movement will notify her.

Caitlin obviously has sexual experience do to her knowledge of what to touch, what to say, and how to tease. I bet she can make Alpha's come very fast as well.

With her giant hand, I'm picturing a girl putting her hand in a baseball glove and wrapping her hand around a dick. The glove would dwarf his member and she would have a good grip on it.

I found it funny when she said "Ew". And it's not like she didn't expect that to happen. I bet she just didn't expect Jack to come that fast and when she finally noticed something sticky on her hand, she got surprised. It's like if someone spills milk on you and you freak out not knowing what it is, then someone tells you to relax and they say it's just milk.

Lots of heavy vocabulary. It's a good thing, don't get me wrong. I like learning new words here and there.

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Hey TomSpeedy, once again you've gone to great lengths to analyse the chapter, which is very cool! It is definitely meant to be erotic, this is 100% a sexual fantasy of mine, and the humiliation and injustice is definitely a key component in what makes this type of scenario very compelling to me (though I doubt I would want to experience this kind of subjugation in real life, even if there was such a giantess). It's these conflicting feelings of arousal and fear that really need to be maintained throughout the chapters with Caitlin, fuck me - she's incredibly hot, but fuck me - she's a nasty piece of work. Her character is clearly sexually experienced, a result of how attractive, popular and aggressive she is, but she's become bored of how no-one is a match for her physically, and Jack is like the opposite end of the spectrum entirely.

I'm not sure I like the baseball glove analogy, I don't think being jerked off by a big, awkward, coarse glove is especially sexy! It's a giant human hand, with feminine fingernails, that's as powerful as a hydraulic press but just as capable of sensual, delicate movements as a normal hand. The scaling up of normal body parts is something I find fascinating, and vice versa - Jack's dick would be about 2 inches long and laughably puny compared to her. If you wrap your own hand around your pinky, that's basically what we're talking about here.

The “Ewww” bit is Caitlin being a bit prissy, and also trying to belittle him further. She wanted him to come quickly, on her terms, and why miss out on an opportunity to make him feel bad about it too!

About the big words - I'm quite a wordy person, and I am chronically guilty of using a long word over a short word if it is more specific, even when most people would rather use a simpler word to make comprehension easier. That's my opinion - I'd rather be more specific, and describe more accurately what's happening, than use simple language. I've definitely learnt more words in the course of writing this, which is actually a really good exercise for me, and has made my diction generally a bit more articulate!

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 1:28 PM Title: Culmination

Wow! I wonder if she really wants to train him, to break his mind, and worship her. To be her personal pet, that nobody can find.



Author's Response:

It seems that way, doesn't it!

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