Date: July 23 2015 6:38 PM Title: Complication
These bitches are crazy, and the parent's have some kind of sway over things! Basically, it doesn't seem like Jack is safe even if he managed to get away, what's stopping her from kidnapping him again?
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 4:20 PM Title: Complication
Jack made a great point. If he fell asleep, when he wakes up, he might make sounds or he could snore during his sleep. It may be quiet, but when you are that close to Caitlin, a single movement is risky. He made the right choice.
This story has a lot of reviews. Especially a lot per chapter. I blame your writing; its just too good. This story is like a giantess thriller that even my own heart is pounding! I guess thats what makes it unique.
You would think that with Caitlin's power, she wouldnt mind just kidnapping another little guy. I really wonder what is her interest of Jack. Does she like him? Is she obsesed with him? Did Jack do something and she wants revenge? I dont think theres any connection. I think she just wants someone to control and someone that no one will care about. She even said that "he is the weediest kid in school". She wanted a nobody, someone that no one will miss. However, some people do miss him.
Penny and Delon miss Jack and now want him back. The question is how, especially in a deathtrap such as Caitlin's house.
Not only is Caitlin's house a trap, but she got a 'friend' who is gonna find Jack and guard her room.
I have a feeling that Amber will find Jack. Caitlin would never check her own teddy bear, but when you look at the teddy with a new set of eyes, one may find a good hiding spot and I think that is exaclty what Amber is going to do.
Another reason why I think that Amber will find Jack is becuase she is good at finding things, especially when Cailtin keeps calling her to help her. We can see this when Amber says "so, what have you lost, again" implying that Amber has helped Cailtin find other things before. She is specialized in finding things, and Jack is no different. He is a thing in their eyes, and even Jack knows it.
I dont know how Jack will escpae this one, but my bet is that he has to secretly make a deal with Amber to hide him, and then Amber has to fake the rest of her search as she hides Jack. Otherwise, I think he is screwed.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 1:12 PM Title: Complication
Unlike Edexdexx, I never SAW any of those movies. But, I do know that he won't be able to FOREVER evade AMBER.
;-D
Date: July 23 2015 11:26 AM Title: Complication
And the suspense builds. I'm glad that you're continuing this story. Really interested to see if Caitlin has some kind of secret love-hate relationship with Jack (which maybe is why she kidnapped him?). Also wondering how Penny fits into the coming chapters. Tingling with anticipation whatever the result. Keep posting it's getting juicy!
Date: July 23 2015 9:14 AM Title: Complication
Are you ever gonna make the story esrn its gentle tag, or are you just gonna keep stringing me on :p?
Great stuff as always. Looking forward to more (and renders!)
Author's Response:
Haha! Inevitably the story arc will continue along its current path for a while, but gentle content has been planned out and will take place. I cannot promise when, either in the context of the story or in terms of when I'll get round to it - but there will be more eventually.