Date: May 29 2015 8:50 AM Title: Desolation
Hopefully Jack won't rergret it...! I'm sure he'll be fine.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 12:06 PM Title: Desolation
Hmph! I thought the T-shirt was simply to cover him up. Although, admittedly, that'd be over-kill, seeing as he's locked in her wardrobe (which is probably too strong for him to break out of in his current condition).
[Report This]Date: May 26 2015 9:53 PM Title: Desolation
Just read all 8 chapters! Amazing!
Its interesting to see a story with these size differences. Kinda refreshing.
I actually like Caitlin's use of tape, to make him bound and mute.
In this chapter, she locks him up in her wardrobe while he is still taped up. Does she really have to do that? I dont think so, unless her parents are back. (I hope so.) That would be a great plot twist. He might escape one giantess, but can he escape all 3?
Author's Response:
Caitlin locks him in the wardrobe, a) because it had a lock (!) and b) because she has stopped underestimating him. He tried to roll off the bed when she wasn't looking, and managed to escape and hide in the bathroom when she popped out of the room for just a moment, perhaps she's realised it's better to be safe than sorry? She also appears to spends several minutes making sure there is no way out of her bedroom and en-suite either, though you could argue that's because it's the first chance she's had to think about it since bringing him home. It was an impulsive act to kidnap Jack, so she's probably figuring this all out as she goes along.
From an author's point of view, I originally had her pile some clothes up in front of the wardrobe, but over time I thought that it was yet another example of Caitlin not taking proper precautions and making her character less plausible. This is a determined, irate girl who has knowingly kidnapped another person, she's not going to be half-arsed about it.
Also: just to get this out of the way - her parents are away until Sunday, and it's only Friday afternoon.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2015 5:01 PM Title: Desolation
It kind of sucks that the only woman that is sexually interested in Jack is a crazy person like Caitlin. Honestly, I'm sure if she was even a little nicer and less rapey about it, Jack would be willing to return the attraction properly. I wonder what the punishment for rape and kidnapping is in the world? If Jack were to get out would he rat her out?