Date: March 23 2017 6:19 PM Title: Abduction
Hoping jack get outtal this and back to Penny...She's nice.
Intriging world so far.
Author's Response:
Review #200!!! BWOOP BWOOP BWOOP!!! AIRHORN FRENZY!!!
But yeah. Thank you to everyone who has reviewed this story, especially PixL8Ed, who swooped in to take the 200th review like a hawk when I said I would 'make a fuss' of whoever got it. BWOOPS 4 LIFE.
Date: October 04 2013 10:03 PM Title: Abduction
Things aren't looking good for Jack. My gut says he's gonna endure at least one day worth of torture if not two before hatchig some spur of the moment plan of escape. While I don't want him to suffer an INSANE amount of humiliation and physical brutality, it would help justify his views on Alpha women at large (at least to some extent). Also wondering how things will develop between Jack and Penny whenever they meet up again.
Hope to read more soon!
Author's Response:
I like the phrase 'Alpha women at large'! Pun intended?
Date: October 03 2013 1:06 PM Title: Abduction
great story so far
[Report This]Date: September 28 2013 8:15 PM Title: Abduction
This is one of my favorite new world order stories I've read! I love the idea you had with the growth hormone... makes for a great plot :). I look forward to finding out what happens to Jack at the hands of Caitlin. Her domination of him has been very satisfying so far. Keep up the good work! ;D
Date: September 25 2013 6:20 PM Title: Abduction
Excellent! Can't wait for chapter 6 and many more...
Date: September 25 2013 10:38 AM Title: Abduction
Is it weird I'm really into this whole girl-bully boy-victim thing? Loving the way this story is going! You're really good at writing chapters that are just short enough to be thilling, and just long enough to be satisfying!
Date: September 24 2013 2:05 PM Title: Abduction
The opening couple of paragraphs were really great although I found it strange that nobody saw them in the corridor, especially since a teacher was there seconds earlier. It still felt it was a good chapter though, as I liked like the description. This chapter was quite inspiring actually, and comment about the corridor is only a minor issue and think she did what she did precisely because there was nobody there to stop her.
Author's Response:
It's between classes so there's not really anybody around... but I never said nobody saw it happen... ;)
[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 9:13 AM Title: Abduction
The UK has a saying: "In for a penny; in for a pound." Well, right now, I'll bet Jack is wishing Penny was there to pound Caitlin!
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I doubt even Penny would have much luck against Caitlin in a straight fight. Also - I'm a Brit, so yeah I've heard the saying! This story is written in a pretty mid-atlantic way though, it's got elements of both cultures and terminologies fused together in it.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 6:40 AM Title: Abduction
Maybe she still have some 'humanity' and empathy in her, for a moment she seemed like a normal girl, although it didn't last very long for the little beta. Heh
Is Caitlin's body only very toned or more like bodybuilder type?
Author's Response:
She is an athlete, so her body has shapely, well-defined legs and arms and a very flat, firm stomach. Though she is incredibly over-sized (imagine a 5' 9" girl over doubling in size due to experimental growth hormone) she doesn't have the same sort of physique as a more squat, explosive bodybuilder, but her muscles are almost large enough to put her in that bracket. Think more like a superheroine in a comic, powerful muscles but still eminently feminine.