[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter one
A disabled city and a giantess. sounds like a good time to me.
Anyways I enjoyed how the story is told somewhat from her perspective, I believe this writing choice will serve to make the subsequent chaos that much more personal.
In a way this story feels like one of those giantess FX videos where they destroy the model cities, but about a thousand times better.
Good to see your name on the front page again Ifcfan
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks a lot AW! Yeah, I'll be sticking to her perspective mostly, sometimes jumping to a more 'local' narrative just to cover stuff that she simply can't see from her POV or doesn't care about. And I'll use Raymar's POV too sometimes as a change of pace.
And I feel I can do a lot better than the last chapter. When I began writing, I never anticipated how much the creativity inside of you depended on your mood, and lately I've just been plain bored. Oh well, time to read those classics of Grildrig and co.