Date: December 14 2013 12:57 AM Title: Intro
Very awesome addition. I'm glad that she didn't stay weak to the tinies.
Also, I really like the little singled-out senarios... Like at the very beginning of the story where she has the tiny on her finger tip, and where the business woman seemingly offered herself to the goddess, and also like in this chapter where the many fell onto her arm. Very sexy and humiliating to those people haha. Hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I try to put in some of those now and then because it really exemplifies her relationship with the tinies and they are much more personal in nature. But considering her scale, the fact that she's rampaging on a city, I'm finding it hard to consistently do so in every chapter. I definitely will try and put one or two more before I end it. :)
[Report This]Date: December 10 2013 5:36 PM Title: Intro
Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but I got the impression when she first appeared and looked to Raymar's skyscraper and smirked at him. It makes me wonder if she's going to be looking for him at some point and why would she be?
Author's Response:
Yes, she'll meet him, I'm saving it for the end. :)
Date: December 02 2013 3:39 PM Title: Intro
Once again, very nice addition to the story. I love the brutality and certainly don't mind all the nice dirty stuff ;)
Hope you can post more soon. Cheers
Author's Response:
Thanks! Already working on the next chapter. :)
Date: October 29 2013 8:42 AM Title: Intro
Love this story! Cannot wait to see her lose control and go crazy! Please keep 'em coming!
Author's Response:
And that'll happen very soon I hope!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2013 6:24 AM Title: Intro
Awesome beginning! Really like the scenario and the style...I hope it's getting filthy. xD
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll definitely sway in that direction! :D
Date: September 10 2013 9:34 PM Title: Intro
Very nice job on the intro. I loved to get absorbed in the details and vivid imagery when reading such good writing. Well done! The first chapter is excellent as well. Cannot wait to see how her lust builds up! :)
Author's Response:
It is going to be slow, and painful for the local population, I can assure you that! :D
But thanks for the review! I'm especially glad that you enjoyed the intro too. I started this as just a girl having her way with a city but I just can't seem to get myself to write a story without some sort of a plot, no matter how basic it is.