Reviews For day at the pool
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Reviewer: Halothecool Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2021 6:35 AM Title: In deep sh*t

Amazing hope to see more 

I hope you make more lewd stuff with the daughter's younger ones 

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 4:34 PM Title: In deep sh*t

This was another great and creative death. I love the evil poop dome. Maybe you could go fully evil chapter and do death by tampon or maxipad



Author's Response:

I don't think I would be doing a tampon death because I would have to say that that's just my limit. I would just not be able to get into a mindset to write about that. Also, I can't imagine these girls going to the pool while on their period and so wouldn't be using tampons.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 7:00 PM Title: In deep sh*t

Lucky Jasmine to get shit on by a middle aged goddess. The world is such a scary place when you're small, and Jane was nice enough to construct a house out of her shit for the poor girl to live in. It takes real skill to build a house for a person just through the act of shitting. Jane is a real goddess to be able to do something like that.

Too bad with a mere flush Jasmine was sent swirling into oblivion and wasn't really able to enjoy her new home that Jane kindly had built for her...



Author's Response:

Yep, it was a fully furnished house. Even had a little swing out back for her to play on =) It is kind of sad though, she will never be able to live teh rest of her life and died before she even finished her teen years.

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